[sandglass (Uyuu Atsuno)] ochiru -asuna- (Sword Art Online) [English] {doujin-moe.us}

Multiversal huh...

Well gotta say as fucked up as this twisted awful shit is created by nothing but the pathetic cowardly punk bitch forever virgin otaku losers in a really REALLY sad attempt at some sort of revenge, payback, jealousy, pick one toward any of us guys who get chicks and get laid like they never ever will but the end wasnt as bad as the cunt deserved but it was good start cant just change into a whore and rip your mans heart out and fuck someone right in front of him and get off the hook with no consequences... nope once a whore always a whore and you will remember and feel it forever.

This reminds of Fate series. Takashi Takeuchi.

Better ending

rape asuna is goog

I know it's just non-canon fanfic, but I can't help feeling smug at Kirito's cucking.

alternate ending.... (I prefer this one)

Ya tht would be good too

Honestly I wish the end was something like this (kirito just turns around they look at his saying "what" and kirito just geos "Fuck this im done"! And justs logs off and never comes back...