Game of lust [English] [Rewrite]

And Yellow Temperance

It looks like the cut all of Sailor Mars from Sex Pistols+ and used those panels with ones from Tubular Bells and Super Fly

Why do people feel they need to change other people's work like this? At least tell us what hentai it derived from so we can read an unedited version, or better yet, upload the original work as well so we can see how much of the story they cock up. I understand that translations take some liberties but changing the fundamental story is too much in my opinion.

Whats the last page from? Cant find it anywhere

For an English re-write, the English is pretty bad.