[Otabe Sakura] Unmei no Hito Zenpen (COMIC HOTMiLK 2016-04) [English] [CyroIIzaru]

To summarize, the dude wanted to get back to his brother because he's been treated like a burden, so he tried to soil his sister-in-law via blackmail only to be dumbfounded by her infidelity and carnivorous behavior? Could be interesting but this feels rushed with weak dialogue writing. And with how the plot is framed, this just rewards the whore wife. Maybe at some point in the whole series, the wife will be found out or something and makes the brother's feeling more justified, but overall, this is kinda weak which is expected on NTR. It's a subversion of blackmail NTR, but there's not much substance other than the act of subversion.

What a plot twist

Well he certainly got his wish fulfilled ig

CURRENT OBJECTIVE: SURVIVE

Less FUCKING gooooo

YOOOOO WHAT A TWIST

How the tables turned

Marvelous art, consistency, fantastic. Thank you

this is confusing who wanted to fuck who first?

Ohh my prediction is right her eyes in page 5 on the bottom left are the eye of the hunter seeing its prey.

Sister in law:【Ｕｎｏ　ｒｅｖｅｒｓｅ　ｃａｒｄ】

We did not expect that did we

Person below me is a true poggers man

204769 continues

Damn son. She pulled our her uno reverse card and took over the black mailing

OH SHIT!!! I LOOOOOOVE PSYCHOLOGICAL SHIT ALOT AAAAAAAAAAA!!!

hah i got u NTR'd she totally pulled a Unno reverse card on him

Okay lemme get this straight... So she's had eyes on Ibuki this entire time?

This is confusing

dont fvk craziesss

what the fuck

@BebeHillz Fuck it man! Those kinds of manga for losers. Childhood friend cuck by your brother and you still love her lol.... c'mon man there are plenty of other girls why stick with those kind. if it's manga about few night stand with her then it fine but why get obsessed.

This story not have Ch 2?

That boy got jebaited.

.... Not that good. Needed more build up for us ti understand more about the sis and why she was seen in such a good light in the first place. If anyone is interested check out the manga: Tokyo Dted. Has a similar base plot. Dude likes girl thats dating brother. Dude nutted one night just from hearing them fuck. Moves to tokyo to work part time and stay away from family but twist is that since that last fap he hasnt gotten hard for any girl since. Finds a job working as a bartender surrounded by women. Decent read and has like 40 chapters if i recall

No chapter 2?

She legitimately “no u”d him

Lol, didn't saw it coming.

Shit trash 0/10

Man.. it's a shame that the next chaps aren't translated yet..

@Iexpectedbetter its always good to see you comment man, your butthurt attitude and necessity to look out and flame on NTR is actually half of the reasons I caome to this site currently

@7 eyes. He resents his brother because his brother treats him like a burden. That's pretty normal.

poor grammar! what kind of tag is that lol

These type of characters almost make me go limp despite the art. The little faggot gets help from his brother in his time of need and hates him for it and wants to take his girl? (Tho as it turns out she's playing everyone) People writing this either have problems themselves or genuinely have a fan base that think like this and thus make money of of it because they enjoy a story with such a pathetic mc

Pour gamma

what was the poi t of this, what is her plan, it doesn't make any sense.

This is amazing !

Lmfao I can't believe there's a "poor grammar" tag

When someone's turned on by "poor grammar" they be like "I'm cummed!"

What a twist.

Sister in law uses counter rape . Its super effective. I fapped

page 18 i like her face

why is "poor grammer" a tag?

Then ? It is cheating ? Or what ? Whatever , i can feel my boy going bigger

i can feel my dick saying "oh shit" on page 17

so the fucker got fuck

What a fucking cliffhanger!!! Fuck!!!