Both Ends [English] [Rewrite] [olddog51] [Decensored]

The thought of an older woman listening to others having sex and showing her desire was the best part to the script

what the fuck am i reading

what a shit

Rewrites are dumb and waste of time

People who do rewrites deserve to be lynched

Those rewrite are always so awkward and the names -.-

Can anyone kindly give me the link the the original?

i can never tell what bubbles to read first in these rewrites.

some of the lines in this .... very odd