(COMIC1☆13) [OrangeMaru (YD)] Skill Kyouka Kaikin + OrangeMaru Special 04 (FateGrand Order) [English] [N04h]

Nigga, this is honestly one of the best dojinshis I've ever read!!! <3

Even though i have read this years ago , i decided to comeback because of rin collab with HSR . Still as good as i remember

@TfwHorny i absolutely agree with your analisis, this doujin is great and the artist is clearly talented, but tbh i think it would have been better on monochrome, i'm not a huge fan of coloured doujinshis, but hey, i'll take this one

Female assisted rape is the best 🔥 Missing rape tag 💢💢💢

needs a rape tag smh

Another win for the bisexuals

All Fate girls are whores , cool

Update: no np2 but I'll take the np1. Mating bar goes hard 🔥🔥🔥

Eresh stans rise up. Also got mine in 8 singles but failed to get more

Update: got her in 40 pulls. I'll try for np2 later today

Well since space eresh is a thing now this will be my catalyst in approximately 3 minutes

Actually, that was pretty poggers

That was nice

Cover reminded me of Erect Sawaru

Okay this is hot

An attempt at an objective rating for this doujin. First of all I would like to say that the art on this peice is beautiful nearly 10/10 unfortunately there were certain parts that felt a bit underdeveloped, namely the 2 sided dildo scenes. Given that a clear amount of effort was clearly put into the art I would firmly give it a 9/10 nearly perfect if it weren't for the somewhat confusing framing of the later scenes. Secondly the story, unfortunately what his doujin has in art it lacks in story, while not entirely void of story the plot felt forced and overly manufactured at times, characters simply being driven by leveling up felt shallow and frankly unrealistic. I understand that since this doujin was based off a preexisting franchise there were bound to be story references I missed so to give it the benefit of the doubt I'll award the story a 5/10 perfectly mediocre

Now the creativity. I see basing adoujin off a game as interesting but a little uncreative, while they may have done a mediocre job at constructing a story the base idea was what really through this doujin under the bus and made me disappointed in the beautiful art going to waste. That being said while it has been done time and time again it's not horrifically overused to I'll give it a 3/10 for creativity All together with a 9 in art a 5 in story and a 3 in creativity that averages out to a rough total of 6/10 for this doujin. Definitely expected better from a doujin that makes every page look like the cover

This is just really well drawn holy shit

That based dude from Reddit sent me

Hmm

But did Eresh get her skill up or not???

@Tfwhorny what is this indepth analysis on a doujin

Rin-face = <3

Shit’s hot, Ereshkigal being cute as always, PNC basically non existent. Im usually a cunnysuer but this one goes hard. 8.7/10

Very good, but the footjob tag is useless if its only for one page that isn't in the doujin.. just has bonus..

It should've been me not him

God bless the Fate franchise YEAHHHH!!!!

Seal of approval 🦭 ✅

the guy was so fucking annoying lol like can he just get cucked and leave them be

the artwork is on par with some of the high end manga artists like second life ranker its a more pastel color style so its less noticeable but you can tell

Fate/Go been customizing the same characters💀💀💀

@TfwHorny bro really wrote a 6 paragraph detailed page by page review

One of the best

Masterpiece fr fr

Wth bro you wrote whole essay

A timeless classic

@TfwHorny, dawg wtf 😭💀☠️

@TfwHorny MF wrote the whole ass lore to MW

@TfwHorny This mf wrote a whole plan to reunite the Soviet Union 💀💀💀

This is technically cheating

this is technically rape

@TfwHorny motherfucker out here writing a whole ass essay but fr this might be the only doujin where I would do the same bro respect

this is honestly such a timeless classic. what an absolute masterpiece

this isn't anime battle arena

Bro this guy wrote a whole plan to beat North korea

mmm,wow,this is some tasty sauce

First, I wanna preface this review by saying that yuri is definitely a positive for me. However, some people may disagree with me, so take this review with a grain of salt since it is, as always, my opinion and could change from person to person. Additionally I know nothing about the Fate franchise so these characters are new to me, getting rid of any bias I may have towards said characters. Pages 1-5 are the set-up for the doujin and honestly there’s nothing really important about it. Page 6-7, the blowjob scene, is really quite nice. The facial expressions of Ishtar are super seductive, however it gets much better on page 8-10, when Ishtar is riding on top in order to satisfy herself without any thought of her “toy”. The creampie x-ray on page 10 is really well executed, with Ishtar’s facial expression being the icing on the cake.

However, page 11 ruins the immersion quite a bit when you realize that on the first panel, the man is lying on his back, but on the third panel, he is turned around. You could say that he just turned around while Ishtar was still speaking, however she has only spoken one other sentence. The sentence being, “I wonder what the voyeur goddess thought of it.”, seems to be what prompted the man’s sudden movement. I believe that instead do having him completely switch positions, the artist should have had him go from the lying down position to the sitting up position. However, this is really quite a small nitpick as I can’t really find fault with much else of this doujin.

To be completely honest, I don’t really understand what happens on page 12-13 since, as I said earlier, I have no knowledge of the Fate franchise but since Fate Grand Order seems to be a game, and they are talking about leveling up, I assume that Ishtar is offering something that Ereshkigal apparently needs. What happens on the end of page 13 and the beginning of page 14 is what I dislike the most about the story. You have Ishtar, who seems to be quite hostile to Ereshkigal (who is apparently her sister?) and Ereshkigal completely forgets about that and walks on the chains. I don’t know if this is how Ereshkigal acts normally or something, but it seems quite stupid to me. Page 15 and 16 are super hot. Ishtar fingering Ereshkigal who attempts to deny that she’s feeling good is one of the hottest tropes in hentai doujins.

However the transition from page 15 to 16 is quite sudden and jarring. Ishtar and Ereshkigal go from standing up to suddenly being on the bed. I get why the artist did this, in order to keep the action constant without having to waste a panel to have the characters move, but as I said earlier, I have to nitpick the smallest things in a doujin as good as this. Also this may be quite random to add to the review now, but I really appreciate how the artist draws facial expressions when characters are cumming. The half-lidded eyes, plus the wide open mouth, the tongue which is slightly sticking out, and the small stand of saliva are all super hot to me.