(C94) [Yuuki Nyuugyou (Yuuki Shin)] Ishin Denshin - Telepathy (Xenoblade Chronicles 2) [English] [biribiri]

Well, I can’t tweak all the dialogue, but for the final page, i’d have the whole crew say something along the lines of: ZEKE: Good to see you feeling better hey, Pyra. PYRA: I’m really sorry, everyone. DROMARCH: We knew blades recovered easily (or quickly, your choice), but because of your circumstances, we didn’t want to take that risk. BRIGHID: It can’t be helped. We were quite concerned for you. (Yeah that one’s gonna need some adjustments) ZEKE: You’ve been awfully quiet there, chum (Rex), what’s up? REX: Huh?! N-nothing! I’m fine! Really. NIA: Huh? Your face is all red. Don’t tell me the poison got you too? REX: Um *stammers* PYRA: He’s alright. I think he’s just exhausted from staying with me. Aren’t you Rex? (Well not the most accurate dialogue based on the characters, but it’s better imo. Thanks for reading all of that.)

@muds1917 my god this is just a hentai ,chill my friend

jesse what the fuck are you talking about

muds1917’s review is the only reason I have this thing favorited. I love going back to read it again from time to time. One of the few consistent joys I have in life honestly.

Design hot take, Pyra and Mythra's character designs just arent good, to a character concept standpoint, it doesnt make sense, two otherworldly beings that are meant to be wrapons and are warriors are dressed oh so lightly with the shortest of shorts and no shorts at all. Their design was focused more on the eye candy appeal route rather than fitting the character concept of battle ready warriors, come on, compare them to the other aegis in the game that arent humanoids nor women, the rest have a motif behind them, befitting the character theme they portray then you see these two with their booba and exposed skin. But they make good doujins so theyre still an S tier character

pyra best girl

YEAH SMASH

Welcome to smash

https://nhentai.net/g/259788/ part 2

(MAJOR SPOILERS FOR XC2) I am not going to lie; I have a bone to pick with this doujin. Art – The art is decent, nothing to write home about. I feel it started strong and tapered off as the characters began getting dicey, but I do like the style. There were a few drawn angles I liked, such as the ones on pages 11, 13 and 20, but there were a lot of weak ones as well.

Writing – The story is the main thing that annoyed me. The characters do not act like themselves at all, and I struggled to attach their voices to the writing (especially with no accents to be seen). This could be a translation oversight, but it goes further than that. On page 6, Rex says, “What’s gotten into me…? Normally I would never do something like this.” which makes no sense considering the lack of awareness we see from Rex in the main game. Considering Rex’s response to Nia’s blade reveal in chapter 7, it is safe to assume the moron would have no impulses to begin with, for any of the women in the game. Then again, we do have the post-battle dialogue between the two that would suggest he is not completely unaware. Still seems unlike him to act this way at all, even with this supposed “horny poison”. More on that later.

Furthermore, the writer keeps bringing up this “blade recovery” thing, with Dromarch forgetting that blades recover on page 22, saying, “We forgot that blades restore quickly”. It makes no sense for a single blade in the party to forget, let alone the wise Dromarch, if this were even the case. This is the Aegis we are talking about here. We see multiple times from the game that Pyra does not recover normally (a side effect of sharing her core crystal with Rex) as opposed to Malos who we see recover just fine (if not better than your average blade) from Nia’s cancer bubbles, also in chapter 7. It is sloppy writing to explain that which does not need explaining, and the art was not good enough to carry the awful writing on its back.

Lore – This doujin has multiple problems, starting off with chronology. If nothing else, the events of the story would make the most sense post-game. We know for a fact this is not the case, considering the still-cracked core crystal (and ignoring the more obvious). I initially thought the doujin took place on the Argentum Trade Guild, but a second viewing leads me to think Torigoth, Gormott. I went in-game to check the inn’s, finding that it takes place in Torigoth due to the lantern and door visible during the doujin. Considering the complete lack of Mythra and the location, I would say that it takes place before or during the beginning of chapter 3, but this is debunked because we see Brighid and Zeke talking on page 22, meaning Morag and Zeke are in the party, meaning this must take place later than chapter 5. Problem is, the party does not go to Torigoth any time after chapter 3, bar Rex’s hallucinations in chapter 10.

My second problem is this idea of “shared pleasure”. A neat concept, but we do not see Rex and Pyra sharing anything other than pain during the story. We see them sharing physical injuries, not emotions or dopamine. Feel free to correct me on that, it is not something I could easily fact-check with Google. Lastly is this whole poison thing. There is no such thing as a poison debuff in XC2. I originally thought it had said “virus” and I was going to go on this whole rant about the “Blade Virus” move that enemies such as Mk. VII Arek have, but no dice. What could have been a better explanation is the “Love Source” item from the DLC Sidequest “Making Love Source” which would have explained my initial theory of this taking place in Argentum. The item increases driver and blade trust by 3,000 and would make for a much better premise. In conclusion, this doujin sucked. I could not get half-way through without going limb. I expected better from a supposed “God tier doujin”.

I like your attitude!

This is good for people with feet fetishes

Her legs at page 12 aie

Mother of venus i'm so wet

DON'T FORGET ME!

Come rp with me. ;)

This is amazing!

Naughty Pyra. <3

ahkei nicee

I'd fuck her all day non-stop too if I was Rex

God tier doujin

I'm sad, that ass shot on page 13 and no anal at all. :(

Eyyyyyyyy lmao

Finally some good Pyra :D

Why choose a blonde tsundere when you have a redhead wife to begin with?