[Shoot The Moon (Fuetakishi)] Hayami-san wa Me ga Mienai [Digital]

Metroid is just a low effort troll. Damn its sad to know someone lives to just try and get responds like that.

man, checked twitter and this story....man this story is fucking horrible and is only getting worse.

Why fuetakishi does netorare :(

Im a fan of fuetakishi previous work but now is not good.

Does this Metroid guy post often? I feel like I remember him. I have this unfortunate habit of remembering every piece of trash I see lining the streets. Apparently, it applies to people too~ XD

*grabs a bucket of popcorn* this is more amusing than the doujin

Fukuyama doesnt get the attention it deserves

That metroidcuckfag hahahah so fucking funny, also another funny thing but sad at the same time is the amount of comments here in the supposedly "ntr" series but in Fukuyama-san there is none U.U

chapter2 of this has been done for a while now, but he just uploaded a sketch of 3 and...yea. Im totally dropping this story in general. This fat dude is absolutely the worst kind of person and the female is just getting abused. Not my cup of tea in the slightest.

Hope he change up the characters or story for his next work cause it's getting stale at this point. Great art tho.

yeah and it seems like 4 posts still isnt enough for that pea sized brain of yours, adding more wouldn't actually work, might even need for me to drill a hole in your head and literally shove the words inside in hopes it'll get absorbed by your brain to comprehend. Can't even come up with a proper comeback. Nice meme dude.

@Imuya Japanese loves NTR cuz they hope to be the douchebag and not the Cuck like in real life.

at this point itll be easier to copy paste what metroid says and send it back to him to prevent losing brain cells just trying to comprehend what hes trying to say.

or better yet, go back to primary school where your IQ actually belongs, you sound like that squealing nine year old in his xbox on call of duty that throws every fuck, bitch, faggot and cocksucker they can think of to win an argument.

next time try harder, like adding fuck or bitch in different languages to make it more interesting. it should be possible with that brain of yours.

@metroid yeah, claiming someone that criticizes something into a butthurt fag bitch is very original. you cant even get a proper rebuttal on another work and just went with "ooooh suck my dick, bitch faggot since i cant comprehend what actual points are since my brain is as small as my pea sized dick"

metroid is a big pussy faggot, anything that comes out of his mouth are cuss words since its literally a cunt located on his face, i literally see him everywhere spewing cuss words like that's the only thing in his dictionary. 10/10 hes replay with 90% cuss 10% everything else

metroid started his year getting gangbanged by black dudes

Definitely need a 4th chapter on the Yankee story asap, and the rest of Fuukuyama and Elf high translated.

Feels like at this point, the author is just milking the fanbase since NTR genre is on the top charts right now. Check out these numbers lol, #1 in both male and female is NTR in japan https://special.dmm.co.jp/fanza/feed/news/fanza-report-2018-doujin?fbclid=IwAR0WGXdtoF4Tw6ht5wtkgvgQ9v9KaHQk0Fgopt_N_FVMKHow3lxV2WKBIzU, also i was really hoping for more milf action with the yankee one or the elves

Blind tag? OK I'm out but ntr tag... hmm.... contradicting as f*ck... whelp...

looks like a lot of ma-nip-ulation to me

Yikes...author is not really good at ntr or at most generic. Probably needs to stick to previous works.

This just seems plain and average. He chose to make this instead of yankee sequel meh. I'll read the translation without expecting much

Yo translate plssss this story seems like it could be exciting

Die when earthqaukecomes and born. As pig so that I will you and you motherfucker

The childhoodfried is a fucking beta, he couldn't protect his friend, the laughable is that he got intimided to that fatss haha

@GrayKing pretty much

@crixuz im guessing the standard childhood friend is too much of a bitch to man up to the girl his childhood friend and gets cucks by tanned skinned douchbag number xx982 or ugly looking fatass number xx598. Nothing new. It has a blind tag but she sure is using her eyes a fucking lot.

All I can tell it: Taking advantage of a blind girl, her childhood friend cant save her and hes an annoying freak and given she doesnt know what he looks like, hes gonna abuse it. regardless, abusing a blind chick is something i cant get behind. fiction or not

What was the story?