(C91) [Hanamuguri (Tomiyama Akiji)] Jukon no Hana Kankyou Rourakusu | Beauty of the Intimate Curse - Ensnared by Shipgirl Hunters (Kantai Collection -KanColle-) [English] [NullTranslator]

It needs more tentacles like the last one

@HydroAstral yeah i thought it was actually a copy from a printer xD

I'm quite dissapointed, in my oppinion (about the doujin itself, not the translation) ...The previous one was nice, certainly more action packs than this book. Simply put "i like it". This one however...Had two girls to work with, limit only 20-ish pages(like the previous one) per book and the writin...No, not the "plot", the "pacing" are troubling -> First(1/3) are about "breaking" her sister, second(2/3) are foreplay and last are that short anti-climactic "intercourse". Damnit, author! Get to the point when a penis is inside a vagina! Don't wasting your time getting warm-up when your pages are limited! TL;DR : Need more pages.

@HyrdoAstral true, but it is better than some doujins

the art was literally dogshit in a lot of the pages this artist needs to take some anatomy lessons

Wow you are fast @Iexpectedbetter