LuciusWalker
The art could use some work, but it's actually not too bad. The dialogue does seem pretty stiff and unnaturally formal, especially given the situation and characters (Tayuya's VERY informal, and does like to cuss). The sex scene could've been longer and more shown, since the last page seems to kinda rush things, and not show the entire love making. I do love how Tayuya seems to be happy here with her boyfriend, so that's pretty wholesome.
Overall, 5/10, due to its untapped potential.
hahonryuu
whelp, this was shit. shitty art, shitty plot, shitty porn, shitty dialogue...
vortex98
@KingSlum same it just missed the mark
Kirikomori
good quality upload here, just titled 'tayuya', poorly tagged, not even tagged with author
Big Money Salvia
Tayuya best girl but disappointing doujin.











