[Lolimancer] Lolihunt (English)

The facial expression in page 4... come on.

keep up the good work!!

I love loli raping, that is all

Sorry bud, art looks ass. But you do you, hopefully you get good and a make a proper loli rape doujinshi

Art may not be that good but Ai still liked it. Keep up the good work artist :)

Hello, thanks for the feedback everyone. Yeah the art is kinda shit that's no secret, but I got positive feedback for many of the lewder panels. I practise daily and this one is already several months old, I am getting better and I draw everyday. So my next one will have better art and dialogue. Motivation is very important, I'm glad many of you liked it anyway I will start to make the sequel soon. In total it will most likely be 3 parts total, there won't be guro by the way just ryona at most. I go by the name "Lolimancer" now on twitter and pixiv if you'd like to stay up to date, I pretty much exclusively do dark loli content

*me clicking on a loli doujin* My FBI agent: Oh Billy, you've been so nice so far..

Mmm, maybe if you change the art a little, but the plot is kinda ok

This doujin is a trap for lolicons.

C'mon guys, the art isn't even that bad. It's not masterful or anything, but it's not as bad as everyone in the comments is making it out to be. Everyone starts somewhere, even pro artists like ShindoL don't just pop out of the womb with wonderful talent, it takes time and practice to make good art. I bet half of the people whining about how bad this is could hardly draw something worthwhile.

It would have been tolerable if the guy were nice to his pet loli.

You guys' reaction to this is how normal people would react to regular loli hentai

The art sucks but the plot doesnt. The blood was kinda unnecesary since it feels like its going far more dark than it should

*loads shotgun with malicious intent* never. hurt. the loli.....(intensifying aura)

Not my kinda thing but it's not actually that bad, keep going.

Gotta admit art is very low tier deviantart but ngl that title gave me a good chuckle. And Tbh this has a feel lf being somehow cause of the difference to its art style is to what I usually see.

Whatever you do don't listen to these judgmental fuckers that are trying to bring you down. Your art and writing is decent but you will improve! Just keep up the work and don't slack! I personally enjoyed it.

Better than me

So many cunts in the comments here. Everyone starts somewhere and it's not like there's a lot of places to post this kind of stuff. Don't be pricks. Art isn't that great but it can improve if the artist isn't shat on by judgemental, gatekeeping lowlifes too much. Keep at it, fucko. Your art will outshine these mouthbreathers in no time as long as you keep practicing.

Who the hell brought this bucket aof loose bolts, we dont need this site to be the new deviantart, they dont need japanese style artwork there, so we here dont need no western schmucks putting their shit

nice try.... dont delete this dude, dont listen them, and pliss remake when your art is good 😁

Me: Sees loli rape tag. Me: Okay. Also me: Sees shitty art.* Now listen here fucker...

Dude, pal, friendo, come back in a couple of years, please, this stuff isn't presentable. The writing isn't even cringe worthy, is just so pathetic and terrible (premade sentences, bad lettering, verbose explanations...) it gave me terminal depression instantly (not for the plot, but for how it is written). The art has some proportions (but no volume, perspective or any other fundamental knowledge) while the colors are completely puke inducing. Take your time to improve, don't push out to the wide public works that are so unrefined and bad to look at. Many people here just want to rub one off.

I love it when the artwork is so shitty. It's so fucking hot. Someone please do stick figures.

Who posted this DeviantArt-teir shitshow?

holy fuck this looks like shit lmao

Art's suck but the plot isn't (loli+rape) so keep going