(C97) [140km/h (Akagi Asahito)] Furyouppoi Kanojo to Asedaku de Daradara Shitai Natsu. [English] [SquigglesJP]

(C97) [140km/h (赤城あさひと)] 不良っぽい彼女と汗だくでダラダラシたい夏。 [英訳]

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Tags: sole female 192.7k sole male 172.7k nakadashi 115.9k blowjob 102.0k multi-work series 53.6k full censorship 34.1k sweating 22.7k rough translation 15.5k smell 5.1k

Artists: akagi asahito 54

Groups: 140km slash h 21

Languages: translated 268.8k english 140.4k

Categories: doujinshi 486.1k

Pages: 38

Uploaded: 6 years, 4 months ago (1/26/2020)

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[ 5 / 10 ] Wholesome but it feels a bit rapey at times. I wanted to see the girl get more fondled and touched, more tension but it just went straight to dick sucking and fucking. Disappointing and the tension was dropped in a heart beat.

(I cannot fit this into 1 message, so this is part 3, my final rating) Now you could easily overlook the lack of dialogue if you are just here to goon. But from the eyes of s wholesome approver/enjoyer such as myself, it is not dismissable. HOWEVER, the points gained by appealing to such an unusual kink (sweat & scent) could give bonus. But because I do not rate with those biases in mind, it is for not. So... Final verdict: 6/10 Bland, showed potential, overall too conflicting. Feels like an amateur's first work. Not bad but could've been better, a A LOT better with just some small tweaks. WHOLESOME APPROVED - 4.30.2025 3:13AM (est)

(I cannot fit this into 1 message, so this is part 2) This distortion is enhanced by the excessive movement lines. an effect hard to overdo but it has unfortunately been done here. Creating this sense of overwhelming information and disorder. As if I have to track the image in too many places at once and soils the experience. And finally the action indicators can be too excessive. Like every panel is a climax with how many moan sounds are written out on the sides. It clutters the peripheral, and takes away from my ability to consistently track and follow the story. Now onto my second critique; the plot itself. The plot is short, simple, easy to understand, and has been stretched out impressively and smoothly. Clearly a work made with love in mind. But for my personal taste, I find their not to be enough dialogue that explains the characters on a deeper level. I understand the struggles for such a format of art and it's limited time to tell these characters. But, it is still lacking.

(I cannot fit this into 1 message, so this is part 1) No way to say or flip this into something that isn't (within reason, of course) As this piece takes the tale of a rather unpleasant time and manages to convey it in a light that is splendid and divine. Now content warning, as this is a kink play. But it is a soft kink play that is not too revolting for most. Simply relying on the temptations of sweat and scent. If you're into it, congratulations, heaven is here my friend, welcome. If not, it's still a great piece as is. My only critique upon this boils down to one major point and one small note. One; visually the image is rather difficult to read. It feels as if the images themselves are clouded with noise and excessive effects. The sweat seems to be making the characters go from displaying their status as discomforted and dissatisfied with their state. To something more akin to a blob of shiny whites and soft blended blurred greys.

Flip-o-Rama hand-holding missionary

Holy shi page 20 is peak art :plead:

NO TOMBOY TAG???? No wonder ive missed this treasure

I'm gonna kill myself (1)

This is simply peak!

#299080 , Literally has the best Art Style..

I'm gonna kill myself

Title translates to "I Want a Sweaty, Lazy Summer with my Delinquent Girlfriend." Me too, buddy.

Great respect & big thankd for they who solved the math for us to find this code

@jhonskins Lmao same

To think that some people here are mathematicians that solved the same problem to get this code lmao

How did i miss out on this

The best on this site

Incrível, nunca subestime onde a matemática pode te levar!

@StayAwayFromMyVodka sauce?

Aaaaay I remember reading the manga that this doujin is related to. Literally the same characters, I guess this is supposed to be the afterstory?

I'm not sorry but if you read this comment, you'll have a girlfriend in the next few months. To activate this blessing, paste this in other comment sections 3 times... not sure why I decided to repost this. don't really believe in this kinda stuff. I guess I just figured, "why not? certainly couldn't hurt"