KanjiSasahara
A lovely read. More of that please.
Goku..
cute......
Zway21
PEAK!!!!!!!!!
akuyuu9
holy shit that is gabe newell
lolilove0503
Peak incest 🗣️🗣️🗣️
Drake67676767
ts is so good
HumanResources
Sooo… This one has a better story, and the remake have better illustrations… Kinda difficult to choose a favorite, one warms my dick and the other warms my heart…
BIGGIANTBOY12
Is that fucking Gabe Newell at page 44
styx1883
This story is much much better than the rewrite. It made me feel very fluffy
DaNoName
Good written story, plus the brother is not some loser that only look at the lil sis for sex but actually cares as a brother
Architeuthis
Get worked up about that with Joe Pesci in mind could be, as a matter of fact, a little strange.
Doujinshi_Enjoyer1
Better written
Lanievka
It’s good, but bath trope is so overused at this point
just a random passing by truck
it just simply 10/10 😭
Zysperro
Enjoyed the story and panelling in this one a lot more. The drawing style has its charm, I wouldn't say that the new one is better. On technical level - yes, but the styles are just different, it's a matter of taste.
Gideão Rodrigues
perfect
duke1977
This one was better. The other was ok but not as good as this one.
expbreaker
dawg i just discovered this 😭
MadCows18
@Stardew544 the most apt comparison between this and the remake is the One Punch Man webcomic vs manga. You can tell that Murata's art is fantastic at details and dynamic movement but he can't capture that simplistic and clean paneling, goofy expressions and poses as well as capturing that sense of melancholy and depression that embodies Saitama. And on top of that, the webcomic is just better written than the manga. The webcomic is a superior version despite lower quality art.
Stardew544
I think i like this one more. I agree with what MadCows18 said, he put it well.
MadCows18
@raze2012 if you value art and sex scenes, the newer one is better. But this one has better paneling, expressions, narrative, dialogue writing, atmosphere and emotional impact. This one actually deals with something far more meaningful than just incest whereas the newer one is just incest albeit fun and "wholesome".
RLHainne
Dang so this was a lot sadder
skrun
I think i like this one more than the remake
dega1234
So that was a remake 😭😭 10/10
zuzzy
So sentimental, quite different from the new one
raze2012
very interesting reading this after finding the remake. You can definitely tell the author improved on his drawing and shading, and it's a bit surprising how different the original went in comparison. Mom outright leaving the entire house with a new BF, a less naive Shiori who had some ideas about her feelings, a more somber setting where MC was gonna go back to town instead of moving to the town to begin with. Defintiely different moods, so it's hard to say one's bettter than the other.
MadCows18
@Vulnerableguy,gothgirlwelcome I agree that his art massively improved. I'm genuinely flabbergasted by the quality of the latest work. But I'm somewhat disappointed by that work's narrative and paneling as it's not compelling.
Vulnerableguy,gothgirlwelcome
So very wholesome and somewhat sad, author is a shitposter too, his art has improved as well (see last work), I'll watch his carrer with great interest
Illyasviel Von Einzbern
a great work of art indeed
ShinGojira54
Holy shit I think I finally found it. I rem reading one like this years ago, unless I’m thinking of a different one.
plainproducer26
Excellent original work 💯😁
MadCows18
One of the best incest hentai works out there. There's just so much poignant portrayed in this that I haven't got in any other incest works. His existentialist outlook of unable to change due to grudges and past mistakes slowly changes as he leans towards his sister's love for him and her sister slowly admitting to her undying love and need of attention from her brother, it's all so melancholic and wholesome. And the best part of this has to be the paneling. Every panel is intentional in conveying the emotion, relying on realistic dialogues rather than just describing everything they do, the expressions and poses, it's just so well made. 9/10 as a short form work of literature.
cutqqq
Sigma author
shinome0
Gaben included instant 11/10
shinome0
10/10 great art and nice story
Pretz3l
bro dropped this and dipped
Log pumper 69
Who is gaben
MaStickBeHart
Very nice. Would give it 7/10, but Gaben on page 44 pushes it to 10/10
At.man
Mom's a piece of shit
wholesomehentaiaddict
Haven’t finished reading as of this moment but it’s a shame the mom is a cunt
Dreamy_AH
WINCEST MASTERPIECE. I adore love stories with heavy dialogue&emotion. & this filled all the checkboxes. Crying from eyes & penis. 10/10
Windompewpew
NOOO, NOT THE GABEN PICTURE ON THE WALL 😭💀
zeftnyrt
Hello i am comeback. Is thiz so beautiful
Ring_1092
Gaben on page 44
Shogun5722
Any word on a possible sequel?
AshoMako
Now one doesn't get into the details of hentai at times but the audacity of this edit... getting rid of the inverted Nips...
ddf044
Very promising artist, hopefully we'll see more stuff in the future
Akbelh
Beautiful artwork, should get an adaptation
freak960
Plot was good, the sex was shit
Powerfool
Holy shiet! HOLY FUCKING SHIET!!! THIS IS A GOLD MINE! SO BEAUTIFUL!
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