[Osanpo Suisou] Donut-ya-san no Jouren-san (COMIC LO 2020-10) [English] [5jay5] [Digital]

the writing is really messed up. but the art and plots were good

They only eat donuts RIP

the fucking google translation makes me want to kill myself

It would have been understandable if it was a machine translation, but an actual person wrote the translated dialogue and said "yeah, this is completely acceptable english"? These are just words strung together. Onomatopoeia, alright, I can understand that, but there's even not translated text like "ita"... Just translate the manga, you manga-translator. The actual manga is fine I guess. The drawings are cute and the story is alright for a rape doujin.

Awesome but weird English tho..

No 'translation-san' didn't fucking put his best effort into this. 80% the fucking translation show's he absolutely knows how to write both languages, he just insists on writing the exact original dialogue. Japanese has snappy dialogue like this cause its got different grammical structure. Also the part where he didn't even try and translate onomatopoeia. Fucking useless slug. Makes me want to make a better translation.

@Zerobero12 guess what? it's a drawing lol

**quietly presses the favorite button** guilt...

I need to call a Crusader

Should I feel bad for cumming hard on this?

Mhmm this is too much.

Good

Well, at least translator-san did his best

Hope he get raped in prison.

Good story with a good end

So my theory is that they both died and he's just being hella delusional

New location discovered : PRISON

The art is amazing

Fanmade translation? Oh well, better having one than having NONE

Jelly Donuts...

Jesus, a chimp could have done a better job translating.

i could make it in german lol

Mm tasty donuts

Poor grammar my favorite

I'm in love

@CMD71 she goes by the name doping girl or dopindgirl. But that picture has like 10 years. Laura is always a 10 good taste.

Wait, poor grammar is an actual tag?!

this would have been good if the translation wasn't so bad.

engrish is strong here

Well i Love Lolis😍😍👌

What a shitty translation, good doujin though

At least is translated

Not into this story, but the art is well-done.

No! No Brock! Not jelly-filled, no!

New doujin?

Maybe they just talk like downies, who knows.

Aaah, come on. At least, please make the man character that not ugly Bastard

Im a simple man. I see tags lolicon + rape, I hit the hart shaped botton.

It's a godd rape doujin but wtf is this translation?

That scene with brock at the end made me laugh

whats with this translation

This translation is worse than machine translation.

mundo gross

Yikes

When he called them angels at the end had he killed them or were they just passed out and he was delusional?

I didn't know Noble was in this lol

Good one....

The hentai is fucking great but wtf with the translation i'm crying blood

How is this the artists only work? The art is amazing It's a shame the translation is so bad