[V4CK0FF] Kanojo wa Sono Dress ni Awanakareba Naranai. | She needs to fit in that dress [English]

epic haircut ngl

I'm not gonna lie. You did your best so it's okay.i give this a 7/10

what the fuck

Her hair's too unbalanced, for the first glance it looks like pompadour

This artist has talent.

good work

Pretty good but the black borders made it look weird but i would like to see more of it

Yeah, for a first manga this is pretty damn solid. Just take it easy on all the darkness next time lol

Hey, page 4 and 5 are really really good.

Nice work. She was thicc and hot. Onething I would (personally) like to see: less dark scenes and dark in general, like those vignettes Too much gets hidden and covered, you have to struggle to see things instead of focus on what's happening. Like I said, good work. Looking forward to your next manga...

fine_reading

This art style is interesting and works perfectly. Hard to believe it's this guy's first work. Keep on working

My boy, this is amazing!!!! Good job for your first comic!

lel

You know for your first manga I gotta say it's pretty solid nothing too degenerate but at the same time not to vanilla

she do be lookin kinda thicc ngl