[Dramus] Hitorijime - first come first served Ch. 1-5 [Chinese] [牛头人部落×新桥月白日语社]

sb娘们，男的不告白你tm不会主动啊，byd还tm等不下去，别jb搞笑了

This is retrospective, the author wanted to do a tarantino lol

纯爱里的主角有喜欢的对象时会拒绝别人告白，甚至是主动跟异性保持距离，漫画里这位就是纯纯的bitch而已，口口声声说喜欢男主角，但是被黑哥三言两语就聊上床了，理由是不想再等下去...就算没有喜欢的对象也没这么离谱的好吧，就算没有黑哥横插一脚，以后也早晚会牛，女主本性如此

@bigJB21 defense my ass his scummy friend just asked if he can have threesome with a girl like they normally done, it show that both of them are a scum

不告白被渣男搞了也怪不了谁啊？不告白她就只是青梅竹马，被渣男骗了还是变成什么样了你有什么办法。欣赏这个黄毛，就爱看打环和改变女主穿着和性格类的这种NTR（不过这算NTR吗，别人也没出轨啊）

It's already translated, but it's licensed. Licensed title is called "Monopolize".

Someone please translate it

@hentaikingusama They were likely deleted cuz the cunts over at Fakku filed a dmca takedown.

Truly a L mc

So many of Dramus mangas translated and not, got deleted because of those weirdos that literally get into this MC. How you going to cry and bash a fking hentai, bunch of losers and btw, this does not count as NTR since it was her choice and he lost his chance.

這哪裡算NTR了 分明是那個廢渣男有錯在先 人家告白也是在女主沒有對象的時候 怎麼看都是療癒的純愛呀

What @katul said is gold just read that and skip the story

這算是教育或學習類型的本本吧~我個人主要對這作品標題是 不敢告白、直男、丟球、搶奪、心房。很多這類型的作品都會tag NTR但其實這類型都不算是NTR，沒交往都不是NTR

Ayo the essays below What the fu-

2022/3/8牛頭人戰神簽到

Only good for fap 🗿

She would be knocked up and get pregnant sooner or later and the douche bag would left her. And she will become a single mom soon. So naive. A moment of weakness and turn off the future. Become a toy for a douche then become a doll for his friend. Typical NTR childhood friend, makes us become snowflakes.

(Continue) It was mostly sexual he would have given up if she told him he likes the other guy & let me sort out my thoughts. Also it was easy for him to say cheap lines like i like u bc he is experienced & the kids have never been in a relationship. If mc didn't chickened out & confessed she would still have broken up with that dude. So both mc & fmc r at fault for never confessing fmc never told him she got confessed & muscle guy was just horny.

Both mc & fmc r at fault Mc - He wanted to confess but couldn't pull the courage & delayed his confession for really long & when he was about to confess after fmc had sex for the first time he chickened out again. Fmc - Nobody confessed to her at school that guy was the very first to confess she also didn't tell mc she was confessed to so what sould she do. Also her resistance was very weak he fucked her pretty soon after he confessed to her & didn't let her sort out her thoughts. Mc phone battery died at the worst moment so he couldn't invite her to get out of the situation also she didn't reject the idea of sex right away. Also she didn't or couldn't wait when mc told her to wait that he want to say something important & he will definitely tell her so wait. Muscle guy - He knew mc & fmc liked each other he interfere with them knowing that he just wanted to fuck a sexy girl like her as soon as possible maybe he also fell in love with her when they got in a relationship but (contnue)

5/10, not so bad but feels pissed off. Imagine fucking another guy just because he hasn't confessed his love, both Mc and the fmc are stupid and coward. But i kinda like the artstyle so that's why i give 5/10

Damn she’s only in her second year in high school and she is getting ran through like that. She will probably end up pregnant before the end of her 3rd year. Well the Childhood friend has nothing to worry about because he is smart and handsome. Her on the other hand will end up pregnant and fat working a 9 to 5 dead end job to barely make a living. Well unless the gorilla makes her work as a soapland girl…lol

So that's why the title..!!! Even though the big guy is ugly as fuck but he got the girl because he fucked her first instead of MC... Well that's what happens when the guy is pussy and girl is a bitch.

Good art ... dumb story ... not even a good ntr since it tries too hard to be both ntr and a drama. In the end pulls off neither well. The dumbest part is that the biggest victim is also the dumbest character and the only perpetrator of all the story the female mc. *slow clap*

ahh my mind is tainted yet again fuck!!. This whole drama, love and betrayal thing. The fuck is love never felt it.

Ok… so using google Translate I managed to get a rough idea about what happened in the final few pages, ( I think cause somehow Chinese is easier than jap to translate in google). The big guy eventually wants to make the girl his only woman and not to share with anyone else. This is more apparent a few chapters ago when he beat that guy up for suggesting sharing her with his friends. So I think he is just a good guy who genuinely cares for the main girl. The main girl decides to finically face the facts and decides to let go of her feelings for the main MC, thinking he deserves better than a slut like her. So in all retrospect, 8 would say it’s not a bad ending but not a good one either. It’s a nice change that the guy she is fucking isn’t a total asshole. He just falls into the misconception of a delinquent stereotype. In a way you could say Early bird catches the worm.

Yeap author do everything he want but i still say one word : She still a slut , not even MC can take she back or not but she and Mc still young not have experience about love , one question why she love Mc soo why she not confess first ? That shitty thing always happen in hentai

I don't like NTR but bruh I want this series to keep going. I wanna see suffer the MC for being dense and coward enough to never confess his feelings, and watch the girl having a mind-break and getting dumped to feel loniless and pain for being a lazy bitch with no guts to make the first step

why is it not translated

I think that this hentai has a meaning and a lesson for us all. If you want something take it,risk it, because when you wait too much someone will steal that form you, so guys if you want something just take it it’s better risking that doing nothing to get it

I actually can't get over how stupid the "story" is. God I hate romance dramas like you wouldn't believe. Art is good tho.

The chad doesn't piss me off in this one, he defends his girl and hates the fact that she keeps thinking about the mc even though they're going out, which is completely reasonable. The girl pisses me off so much however, first just confess already the fuck are you waiting for? Second make up your fucking mind, if you like the mc then don't fuck the chad, if you like the chad then shut the fuck up about the mc. So fucking frustrating to read with this bullshit "noo the dick is too good I'm forgetting about the mc" cliche when everything is her fucking fault. Like it's not even NTR, it's just her being indecisive and pissing off both sides. It's like reading a shitty romance drama with love triangles, not even the fun kind of ntr. So damn annoying.

So painful to read

Eh kind of dissapointed in the ending. Was hoping for more. Maybe some catharsis or something. Thought the bull was going to throw her away and then MC would win her over again. Them just going their seperate ways is a pretty meh way to end it after all these chapters. I mean yeah "its realistic" but nothing else about the story is so why bother making that the ending. We had an MC who was better at fighting and had an equal cock, so I was hoping for more, a victory for the MC or something

Well girls, tell your feelings to your boy or u will get fucked by some bull :D

中国語を習おう。Thằng bên dưới!!!

Làm ơn!! Có ông nào tốt bụng thì dịch nhanh dùng tui 2 chap cuối với!!!!!😭😭

extra note: i think its also hinted she is in love with MC obviously but she also likes someone who is honest and decisive so when this guy comes at an opportune moment whe shes had the argument with MC and does just that i guess it was a factor as to why she chose to accept. Anyway all ive said is what i interpreted myself but i cant wait till all the chapters are translated to finally fully understand what went down. NGL this is the first time ive commented this much on any work

continuation: and until she herself already realizes its too late and MC no longer deserves a girl like her. So pretty much FMC cause she young dumb and naive out of spite makes a stupid rash decision instead of you know thinking things through thinking who she loves thinking about what she should do to get MC to love her maybe even flat out confess to MC and tell him straight to his face. Alright sorry for the rant if you can even call it that. I dont hate the story at all but the way it was ordered made me want to analyze it more to understand what was going on lol

damn looked at chapter 4 again and yeah this chick is gonna really feel like shit and regret it in the future cause she did this when she was still young and naive. She let that guy take her first out of spite from that argument she had with the MC earlier. Her thought process looks like shes gonna do this cause she mad but if MC contacts her she will change her mind. You can see clear hesitations from when they went to buy the condom to when they are at the house. She keeps looking at her phone expecting something from MC and finally MC calls she looks overjoyed and happy but too late douche forces it in. And through out the story we keep seeing the same process FMC keeps looking a little hesitant thinks about MC and douche notices and basically just dicks her down harder and says "ima fuck harder so you can forget about him" this keeps fmc from thinking right and influencing her into the wrong way. This keeps on happening until you see her basically change into a gyaru type and until

I feel like the one suffering and will suffer the most here is the childhood friend cause she's doing all this in the heat of the moment looks like she isn't thinking this through cause it looks like she still likes MC. Her expressions sometimes show hesitation also since the title is "First come First served". which if you look at it this way she has one she loves which is MC but the One who came first was someone she didn't love and decided to just settle for whatever came instead of trying more for the one she truly loved and settled this way with someone she didn't fully love and the one she settles with which just means means later down the line when she is more mature to realize her mistake she will regret it. Anyway I don't mind NTR but i really wish these stories would at least include like 2-3 extra chapters where we see the Guy move on and get with another girl.

I can't understand chinese,can somebody tell me in the end did MC dating another girl ?

I keep asking myself, why NTR genre always have a great art. I guess people do try different things

will they have a threesome with the friend?

@below: Huh? Rice is a food, it has no language, get your head straight out of the gutter from reading too much NTR.

English when? I can't read rice language

@SchrodingerZ how do you translate manga?cuz google translate is shit af

啊这，还没轮到一个本子教育我如何去爱吧？我就想看肌肉男暴插巨乳女，扯什么恋爱观啊，看完开始思考人生吊都软了，什么玩意？

Yeah Im usually all for a good dark story but in this one Im in the mood to root for the MC, after all he could have a big dick too lmfao. If she doesnt end up with him then I want a bad end for the girl, and definitely the other guy since he definitely doesnt care about her so fucking her up like this is a bit cruel; though that may be hypocritical of me to say.

@SchrodingerZ Simple. It's a derivative of a cuck's psychology of afixing themselves in a negative loop.She is castracting him through repeated sleepovers with Chad. And the cardboard char. of the girl in this generic setting helps it as well. meh story

Aquí no hay NTR la heroína y el nigga soy novios en toda regla no importa como hayan sido las circunstancias, mas bien el quien quiere aplicar el el NTR es el héroe (Prota).