[Panchira Steak] Hatsujo Approach 1-wa (Yuwaku Mille-Feuille) [English] [Joemank] [Digital]

TL-kun you did fantastic

Mating season? So this is just Omegaverse without the Secondary Sex?

thank you delty

Good art. Good story. Believable world. 15/10 would recommend

Thanks Delty

Thanks Delty

母校 is alma mater

Thanks for the translation! Just need a proofreader next time and you'll be golden!

If youre a NTR lover get ur cuck self outta here

Actually, mating cycle existed. You know, in ancient time.

really good work 8/10 and poor grammar doesn't belong here begone

Pretty good.

I mean, it's not gonna win an award but it's actually pretty decent as a first attempt. You'd have to be an idiot not to understand it. That said, thanks for the translation!

I'm pleased this will have a sequel... As for the tags I was expecting to read something very bad but the tagger is the actual retarded

Poor Grammar?! It's Actually very good wtf's wrong with people these days

translation is great if you can't understand you're mentally disabled

nice art. vanilla will only satisfy normal people anyhow.

Mating season.. lol translation make me puke, it could also mean ovulation time

@whiskey140 The translation notes did state that this was his first translation ever, so I’d give him some credit

He’s gonna fuck all three girls isn’t he

The translation is so baaaad, so bad it make me appreciate the art that make me understand what going on without reading the text.

That was hot 😳

This is great!

@Marshal Zhukov @anjel88, Thank You Very Much!

Niceeeeeee

Hot mating season schmex... Just great👌

R.i.p DOOM

It's a good fap, but just.. what am i reading, i don't understand a single thing. But it's a good fap tho.

Day 6 of spitting MF DOOM verses on popular nhentai doujins: "Bitch niggas talk behind your back like a catcher. Either M-Y-O-B or B-Y-O stretcher" - The Drop, Vaudeville Villain

Damn this is gold, can’t wait for the second part

Puta que oferton

Interesting concept. Excited to see more.

Good work Translator-kun!

The Translation was poor but I can understand since it's this guys first time.

Wait I tho human have mating season all years ,JIN you must come here

Nice work on the translations PagMan

9/10 art looks great I like the plot and hows it going can not wait for part 2

That was pog

noiceeeeeeeeeeeeee

1000/100....too perfect....

Can’t wait to see the class rep.

Hmm.. yes I approve this

you know its going to be good when the doujinshi has ,,poor grammar" as a tag

part 2 / 3 coming soon Pog

"btw mating cycles"

Shitty translation aside, pretty good.

what in the world is a mating cycle

Who knew that nutting makes a "whoosh" sound

Finally I understand what they are saying

Ahh, yes mating season. Part 2 come soon