[Musashimaru] Houkago Threesome! (COMIC HOTMILK 2020-07) [English] [JesTranslations] [Digital]

BWHAHAHAHAH naahhhhh this is actually gold

Holy shit, i struck gold, both with the artist and translator

Lmao virgins in the comments thinking pussy gotta be tight. Newsflash, pussy wet, slippersy, and loose when horny asf. It's just asking to have something shoved in

dwyummmm, a little upsetting knowing the big sister possibly a slut judging from how easily his dick went in smoothly, but offeral its good, also i see a lot of comment saying the translation is cringe, but what i see is a cringe pathetic weeb who read the free translation crying because he cant fap to this doujin in his room alone, so cringe... why dont you touch a grass a little dude, you are too invested to this shit lmao

guess i forgot to fav this

These translations man xD

Pretty good art

Homoswansual🤣 Also, @JesTranslations thanks for the translations dude. They're hilarious.

Although I am glad that there's a redo of this, this version is feckin hilarious

I like tomboys, but this one is stuck up and rude.

Throuple any% speedrun

This bihh.....🤦

He really won in life huh

@Who's candice It's always an age of anger.

Damn the volunteer translation team and their.. *shuffles cards* Comedy Translations OMG!! they're RUINING my (free) PORN with sjw woke TRANSLATIONS!!

Based and homoswansualpilled

"Ouch, my bubble but." really

Weird but nice

"OUCH" "...MY BUBBLE BUTT!!!!" Legit had me laughing like a freak at 2 am.

cry havoc and let slip the dogs of war - comment section

apparently, according to these comments, the age of horny is gone. now it is the age of anger.

Someone else needs to translate this from the scratch again because its such a shitty translation. Whoever did this should just gave up on tl altogether. You're not funny and quirky dude, you're an idiot if you thought this is how to translate. What are you, fucking 14?

Jesus, whoever translated things like this is a retard. Its the same with what Funimation and co did with their woke translation. What a faggot

Page 10: ah yes my queens o ly lady looking parts.

Damn Nice Bless This Shit👌👼😍

It went a bit far in some of the end dialogue and it would be nice having the original but. This is fine, I laughed a little, and if it keeps the actual plot, why not

Page 7: "Ouch, my bubble butt" . ......... ...... ...

This cringe ghetto slang translation.

@7thsin with all that text you literally confirmed your status of bawling bitch

Good rewrite tag.

Embrace tomboy supremacy.

This one should on popular list today

@17hunter in case that I've managed to provoke your thought, let me clarify another point about good or bad work. As I've compare this work to little red riding hood(great work, stayed in top page for 2-3 days, ID:372104), you can go and look for its comment section. All or most of all are positive comments, does it mean that it's actually great work that everyone enjoyed, or is it because there is no "bawling bitch" reading that work at all? both of them are on the top page, so most people including your so called "bawling bitch" should checking it for once though. don't know what conclusion you'll have after thinking thing through, but I hope that you can be a more decent "chad" afterward.

@17hunter00 I don't know whether you're trying to not understand or you really don't understand the meaning I'm trying to explain. first of all, this work isn't an incest hentai. secondly, I didn't compare Joker and incest hentai and saying that it actually the same level, I'm comparing it to an extreme case(Joker in this case) to show that how "OFF" it would be to add humour to a story that doesn't made to be funny. In case you don't want to read a long explanation, TLDR : this translation sounded "OFF" to some people including me. Don't know your definition of chad though, is it the laid back bunch that don't bother thinking anything at all and just rating any work no matter good or bad it is as top tier?

why did the cloths disappear from page 10 to 11

At least this is tagged properly as rewrite. Translator added a tad too many liberties to call it a proper translation

Am I a cumdump to you?

My dudes, did you just see this dude and his little dude pummel those queens?? I was like shaaa dude! he really went in there with his dude and laid a double load dude!

Every damn time I read "my dude", Calli's voice resounded on my brain and I started laughing a bit

Berserk Soundtrack - 4 Gatsu (Slowed)

@7thsin LOL are you really comparing incest hentai with Joker????? How can you compare such profound, deep and incomparable story with a stupid ass movie about a bullied clown (seriously these coments are just hilarious)

The chads be like: "great work, great dialogue, really fun, great art, awesome nut 10/10". Bawling bitches be like "aw how could you ruin this like this??! Original dialogue was so much better, it was nothing like all the other exact same 200000 incest doujins in this site, just fucking kill yourself translator"

What the hell, my dude?

@MadMan why do you need a humour in this work? I mean the original isn't even funny, it's straight up story with a 3some ending. Making everything funny is not working in every situation, let's imagine movie "Joker", the movie trying to convey some messages from the seriousness and disturbing character's depiction, imagine how off it would be when you trying to add humour into it. And lastly, the result actually speak for itself as this work with a decent art and story can't even stay a full day on the top page, while the little red riding hood(372104) stay in there for 2-3 days.

Well that waws pretty sweet

I'm all for making the translation coherent, bexause Japanese to English is not 1 to 1, but adding your own flair to it seems wrong to me. This translation really missed the mark for me.

I'll just wait for a different translation.

"Homoswansual" I'm sold.

This is a good one and funny too.

This was 🔥 it's hot and hilarious.... what more do you need. @xisakannx; i'm not sure how this stacks up compared to the original but this was still great, you clearly haven't got a sense of humour and anyway if you're lucky someone might still do a faithful translation.