[Marakkuma] (Zoku) Hatsukano no Kurorekishi (Zoku) | Dark Past of First Love (Continuation) [English]

Made my stomach revolt, I remember watching the girl I liked getting fingered right beside me. It cemented my views. I cannot be with someone who is experienced in any way sexually. This doujin made me remember that. I feel my breakfast in my throat. There have been a couple of works where the MC is a virgin, fmc is not and they show her past and she tells him, those are literal triggers. I enjoy some ntr, but these specific scenarios are so fucking vile to me, like, day or two ruined mood.

what tf is on that bill on pg. 38

Their should be a tag for not knowing who the baby father is

Be a man

I don't know what i was hoping for. I thought they'd just talk about the past and change for the better

This is a story-focused doujin so we review that aspect first: It started good, gave some ShindoL's Emergence (Metamorphosis, #177013) vibes, but then the last quarter of the story felt kinda forced. Art is good overall, nothing too striking nor had 'amazing' sex scenes. What's my take? It's a good one-time read but I felt no impact near the end since I've read so many NTR stories it felt pretty common and somewhat nonsensical the ending. By the time you finish reading, you don't really feel compassion for the characters.

Degenerate trash

Pretty good it's been a while since I've seen good moral degeneration doujin. People taking a out NTR and vsnulle but moral degeneration is such an underused tag ad I'd wish that there's more of it.

what a bitch also man up u idiot

Another boring ntr plot, hope can find another doujins to fulfill my lust

cucks are not made, they're already born that way, they just need their cuck potential to be unlocked

Wtf is this cuck shit

9/10 really good history and great character development

Bro this is pretty fucking bad even for ntr lmao

LOL these comments.

My PP turned softy while reading this even tho it didn't happen before in other doujins with NTR and even Ugly Bastards tags. That ending is just too low and trashy af! Also is this even NTR and Cheating? The girl is just a free2play whore!

@usamiharu Nah, just deflecting because you have no real argument and are just bitching to be contrarian. And yes, copy-pasta stories are the fault of the creators being lazy. Do better? Drawing-wise, no. Writing-wise, yes. I'd bet I'm not the only one around here that thinks so, either. "Right to complain?" Why even have a comments section if we can't give our honest thoughts on a story? Sorry if it somehow hurts your feelings that I like to say more than "Dat wuz a gud fap!" like a mindless drone. I never said anything about the NTR genre's popularity, so I don't even know why you're bothering to bring it up. And yes, I've seen a lot of different types of vanilla that isn't childhood friend stuff. If you haven't, that's on you, champ.

@BZo1480 Deflection ha, was what i deflecting your ignorance? fault of the creator? so you can do better than them? to begin with have you ever even bought their manga/doujinshi and as if you have right to complain about their creation in a pirated site? theirs a reason why NTR is still popular because somebody is paying this creators end of the story, nice talk also for your ignorance, read different type of vanilla your just probably deepthroating the idea or sunshine and rainbows not the vanilla itself you just don't like seeing depressing plot don't open NTR, i always love seeing people saying "different types of vanilla" right cause childhood friends,sitting beside each other,teasing troupe,accidental meeting ARE SO NEW i rather watch School Days 24/7 than seeing someone spouting as if Vanilla is always evolving genre whatever.

@usamiharu To answer the question: Yes, I've read lots of different types of vanilla. I already knew that about the genre, it's the same as the Chinese abusive CEO romance novels/manhuas that have exploded in popularity over the last few years and has the same exact issues that NTR stories have. Has absolutely nothing to do with what I said, but nice try at the deflection. And no, everything doesn't need to look the same no matter how much I read/watch it, that's the fault of the creator for being lazy. Everything else you said is just more boring pointless deflection so I'll just ignore it. Nice talk, champ!

Disgusting trash

duuuuuuuuuude this is fucked up haha, but this doesn't hurt as other NTR...

Sigh...here we go again!

@LordCellofEarth9 U mad bro?

You know what I really like? People writing fucking essays about NTR in the comment section of a porn site.

@damonsykes Definitely not using a brain and being blinded by hate, the main reason why Japan is having birthrate problems is not because of NTR whatever crap you're spouting its because of their work culture or should i say most work culture nowadays where most men are expected to work how many hours a week add that with rising cost of living, that's main reason why, btw most first world country nowadays are having birth rate problem, in US people are avoiding marriage and having a family like plague not only because of work,rising cost of living but also adding the feminazis destroying the men and the court easily sides with women, probably try to research on the subject first before you spout nonsense hurr durr japan likes NTR that most be the reason why they're having population problem.

Just leave the slut in the dumps. As simple as that...sure, it sounds noble to love like that but that's just stupidity. There are plenty of fishes in the sea as they say.

@BZo1480 You can only make so much story etc eventually most stories will just become look identical, its also no different from vanilla to normal anime or really whatever, like do you think Vanilla you read are all different? lol formula all look identical only differences are the char. and you be surprised the one who made NTR popular are mostly women, just accept the fact eventually if you read too much porn or anything everything will look identical you're just butthurt over the fact your trying to take seriously a doujinshi you probably didn't even bought it and as if you have right to complain about it lol, your acting same as idiots from twitter etc who get angry over games,movies that "hurt" their feelings that they didn't even buy.

Of course it's a "dark" past if the guy has no eyes!

Goddamn....

Disgusting cuckshit.

NTR stories will probably never change unless the fanbase starts rejecting all the lame cookie-cutter stories that have been flooding the market the last 10 years or so. And that includes popular artists like Sanbun Kyoden and Rocket Monkey whose stuff is quite literally the exact same story with barely any alteration.

He hadn't even talked to her for like 5 years, why's he still acting like a cuck lol. Good shit tho

art 9/10 plot 8/10, guy below me is a Professor of Ntr

What the hell is this, fucking bitch... Im so annoyed when she said let's raise other people "babies"...

Funny how in the first part the guys dick is pretty much as big as the rapist but he's a premature ejaculator and bad at sex since he was a virgin then in this part his penis has shrunk to be barely half his previous size

Damn that's hurt...

I don't feel the usual rage with this one I just feel defeated and sad... just a deep sadness.

Damn, it be better if the mc wasn't a cuck

Lmao this was alright. I’d give it a 7.1

SIMP LORD MC

HELL YEAH BABY!

My heart hurts but its fappable as hell

The author did his best at making a somewhat believable story for an ntr including pacing. Her solution to the problem is forced as well as the mc being the typical cuck mc of every other story. Other than that this is one of better ntr stories in recent uploads. The art isn't bad either 8.5/10 if the cuck mc had been normal and just broken it would of been higher imo.

HAHA "Then you should be broken too" damn she's a bitch. Pretty good art though.