(C95) [Dokudami (Okita Ababa)] Boku ga Kataomoi Shiteita Bungaku Shoujo ga Keihaku na Classmate ni NTRreta Hanashi [English]

She LIED blatantly multiple times, gaslit him, has public sex, and then just admits she can't keep writing and being horny at the same time? The MC was disgusted and deserves to be, especially after the library card. Cause that's all it took? She didn't gave to kill the friendship to have the relationship that isn't even going to last long. And when Hayao leaves, I guarantee she'll slink right back to Akito. The poeple on this sight are aggressive white knights for the antagonists and take shit at face value. Get off Hayao's dick.

Yeah nah I'm sorry the Mc did nothing wrong. Shio is just shockingly dishonest. Saying that you're dating someone is not a thing to be heavily embarrassed about unless you know something is wrong to which she does. He asks her what us happening when she says she not applying to yhe novel competition and doesn't feel worthy skd correctly points out something just hasn't been right. Too many poeple saying he's projecting or slow when sge was just too fast. She discards everything about herself and her friendship for ONE guy and the Mc is not passive about the signs, he's just kept out if the loop. Even when she says she's not the person he thinks she is, it's a dumb statement. You knew each other for SIX MONTHS. Like my god, the gaslighting is embarrassing abd she knows it. She tosses him out of her life to indulge without accountability abd he leaves her be to that. It's realistic to be demoralized.

Also anyone saying he saw her as an object is very clearly gaslighting. Yes he's a little ignorant and imaginative but good god he just thought she might've been demoralized. And clearly she wasn't going to tell him directly so he could only think to try to inspire her. But him being ignorant about relationships isn't the problem. Both of them knew nothing and I'd argue Shio still knows nothing. Atleast one of them still has their passion in place atleast.

Looking back at this story...why does Shio stop like Akito in the first place? Sje does actually seem to be as passionate about writing as he is, yet some attention from Hayao in one day just...make her go out with him? Very interesting thing. I guess the authore might be saying is that she was flagrantly more shallow than anyone would've thought. It just comes off as odd because Akito us right there and they were engaged in the same thing, getting to that point. Overall I do think this story is weird, especially in terms of the girls behavior. She doesn't seem particularly bullied or an outcast, so it's very interesting how she evolves

Damn this comment section is crazy aggressive. He's a teenager and wanted to do things his way. I wish comment sections weren't so aggressive about attack him. He thought they shared a common interest that bonded them. He was wrong. Honestly I hope thst he continues writing a girl is no reason to stop your passion. Kind of lame she drops her ideals over sex I guess.

This is not NTR, glasses guy was a retard and chad guy even went all white knight when he defended the chick from the asshole in the train, outside the out of doors sex this as vanilla as you can get.

That idiot guy is actually right, y'all bunch of retard cucks.

@Shamanking16 tysm

@hoodclassic69 I think you're referring to "Kimi No Namida No Riyuu O Ore Wa Mada Shiranai" from Taniguchi Daisuke

I once saw something very similar to this but cannot find the source again. IIRC there is a girl and a boy in relationship, the boy is too shy about everything One day the girl mother dies and his partner doesn't notice it. The other guy notices her going to hospital everyday and comforts her, after which he uses the situation to take advantage of her. ps: soory for my bad english.

I don't consider this as NTR. Ffs the OM took her to date & all that stuff

Wait wasn't it revealed that they guy who touched her was a friend of the other guy?

@Idiot-kun you deserve your name👍🏻

@Endratox aw did I hit the nail on the head? go cry about it you incel. Obviously, you're the guy that imagines himself as the cuck, stupid faggot!

@Idiot-kun stfu faggot kill yourself

Gosh I feel like the author and the commenters don't even know what NTR is anymore. That glasses idiot was literally stuck in his own deluded fantasy about that girl. He does not own her, you guys need to stop treating women as objects like wtf is wrong with you guys? There was also no rape and mindbreak lol, she wasn't against it, stop coping you incels.

Why is there no rape and mindbreak tag on this? She was clearly raped twice in this until she was mind broken.

i remember reading this

NO NTR guy had a crush, she choose the other guy, she wasn't stolen because she was never his to begin with.

Wow they crossed out he's name from the library card now thats savage

author is asking the wrong people whether or not the fmc is "realistic"

I don't understand the last panel, what does it mean, why is he shock about the library card?

I didnt understand what the last page's sheet was bout

rip this guy, this dude's work got rejected on a competition plus the girl who inspired him is getting FUCKED like a dog , he should enter politics that would make him feel better

So yeah, this one is definitely missing "mind-break" tag. You can clearly see the girl begin to lose her mind bit by bit (at first she still refuse, then feeling the shame, until finally she addicted to sex).

Remember that the girl doesn't have feeling toward MC and prioritizing her research/novel above all (something that is quite common in real life). That is why she agrees to date with someone who's basically a stranger to her over MC(for her, MC is also just another guy albeit closer). Still, this is NTR. MC have feeling for her, someone stole her, BAM, NTR, pretty simple, right. Also for those who said the other guy is not bad. He is a player and judge girl from her looks and body, and then immediately chase after her with any means (and prolly dump her when he got bored with her). Those qualities may still not make him a bad guy. But then he RAPES her. She's already said NO but still forcing her. Sure, after that she succumb (the usual mind-break, enjoy the rape trope)... but the fact is still that he RAPES her in multiple occasion. Pretty sure in rape case, your defense won't work with "well, at first she said no, but she enjoys it when I rape her and I make her addicted to sex".

This is the best doujin I've read too bad it only has minor sex scenes sigh

To think id find this out of random again

I wished the action part is a bit less fragmented...

@Cuckerspaniel774 You're a cockerspaniel because you think you're Labrador or Rottweiler when you're just a simple poser. If you couldn't figure out the ending, you were never truly one of us Alphas. Go read more, maybe then you will learn to start discerning a clue. How can one call themselves a true NTR connoisseur when they can't even figure out the ending???

@Amir Syarifudin Says the one who lurks around here. Seems to me like you're the one who doesn't have a job and way too much free time. Get off the internet and get a goddam job yourself!

Shiet. She got obsessed with sex real fast. By the way can anyone tell me what chapter 41 means?

Really, she got fucked just like that? And got obsessed with sex afterwords? A shame that the beating scene was skipped.

I can't blame the other guy, I normally hate ntr but the guy who stole the girl did it fair. It's not like they were going out, in other words the girl is free and the dude win the girl.

Damn nigga, can't believe there's someone with so much time to spend on a hentai website to wrote a goddamn essay on something like fantasy cuckoldry. Get a job.

Good art and NTR? LET'S GOOOOOOO

Ugh...i need part 2

Nice, even better than the knight story

More people should educate themselves on what NTR is. It does not have to be in relationship to cause NTR. Example, your crush who you forget now is having a wedding. That is NTR whether you dated her or not before ( still like her or not, you did like her in the past). Because you basically lost her, forever as a man meaning you are less capable as a man than the one who is now fucking her in their happy house. Sure you are not a cuck ( which is saying that you don't get hard on this) but you still got NTRed. Basically.

@yeuvid Not NTR?? Did you deny and ignore the meaning of NTR because it happen to be your experience?? Sure they are not dating here but this is still NTR because he lost her to some dude. Did you lose someone else that you don't want to acknowledge this as NTR at all?? Face reality, man

not ntr but I like what the author did here with the feelings and emotions that are shown here, yeah it lacked a lil bit more of sex panels but the thing to FAP here is not just the sex... 7.5/10

@Amir Syarifudin buat malu kau kontol

Hope mc write novel about bluepilled nice guy to blackpilled mgtow

To be honest this type of NTR situation really does happen in irl(except for the girl getting addicted by sex) which is kinda realistic. But yeah the NTR is weak and theres no fapable panels in this hentai which is 3/10.

@Amir Syarifudin If you can get bitches, then why the fuck are you here ? What? Did your "bitch" put you in the doghouse? Gotta resort to jacking off to hentai doujins now?

@Cuckerspaniel774 [I don't know the meaning of the cryptic message on pg41] Because you're a dumb cuck. Like the MC, you would totally get cucked over irl, POS.

Honestly, seeing NTR has rotten my mind to such point where I can only see women as whores, despite that being not entirely true. What keeps baffling me about NTR stories is take on the female protagonists. Just as SchrodingerZ said, a personality of a lobotomized, half-dead slob. It is to be understood that these are just for selling and profiting. Makes me wonder why Japan is so obsessed with these stories. "[...] lacks any realism on the subtleties of the hearts of man and woman" ergo, they just love to fuck. Props to the girl being a slut, tho. It's reality's depiction what counts lol

Very tasty and all, I like the art of this author ... But, the NTR is kind of weak here ... What does Page 41 mean? I could not understand it. lmao

This style drawing reminds of shoujo romance manga. Particularly female character. Makes my heart go doki doki. The story plot ofc is amazing. Hope there's a sequel.

If the MC wants to be spiteful, he could record them and post it on both the underground student website (you know there is one) and email to the school anomalously. But he looks too wimpy.