(COMIC1☆15) [Lv.X+ (Yuzuki N Dash)] Hatsu Koi no Onee-san ni Amaetai Dake no Jinsei Datta [English] [TQM_Translations]

the ending was weird af, but whatever, I guess

Bed part is so good but it's getting weird here

Uh.. still a decent read but that def counts as character death. You may have forgotten a tag or two.

its a crime to show small flat titties and not show sex with that person

I don’t know how I feel about the ending. The rest was pog though

Well, I just got some severe whiplash from that ending.

Needs sequel for hell shenanigans

Im just here for the plot nothing more

Here is what I got say the girl he missed died and became a demon and she missed so she and him fucked because I bet she died having him on her mind so he took the W fucking the girl he likes and he stays with her so short version W because think about it

Come on they can’t ended like that

Sometimes i like to take a cup of tea and sip it while reading nhentai commentaries, it's refreshingly intriguing.

bro its a nhentai its not about to story i think you need to help yourself stop reading hentai start reading novels or someshit please help yourself

Wait..... theres plot?

Timey wimey stuff

the ending was one hell of a plot twist.

well that ending was unexpected

Somehow yuzuki sensei art style has changed from the usual one, regardless they always consistent with "sister" theme, one of the best "sister" specialist

The bed scene was really hot, but what the fuck with that ending

Well that went south real quick...

he fucking a male succubus this whole time

Yuzuki N Dash, wow I couldn't tell it was her at all.

Its good nice nice

Yuzuki N Dash, now that's a name I havent heard in a very long time

Yuzuki N Dash's art style have changed, and I can't say say that I like it. She used to have a very distinctive art style that's very easily identifiable. In her 2 latest works here on nhentai, the male is shota while the female got massive tits. She used to draw normal size tits that look hot asf, but now it has downgraded to generic huge tits. Even her style 10 years ago is much preferable to this. It's just sad.

What the fuck was that ending lmfaoo

needs uncensor

what the hell was that

Remember boys and girls, suicide is never the answer, it's a one way ticket to Hell! It's exactly like the devil herself to give the suicide victim a taste of what he could have had and then ripping the rug out from under him. Peak despair and number one in the dark comedy section! 🖤

Then the rating rating drops down a notch to a 7/10. Overall a pretty good story marred by lack of originality in how for some reason, the Japanese have been having a hayday with Isekai lately...dunno why, dunno how long it'll last. If Jobless Reincernation is anything to go by though, something decent should eventually come out. Hopefully people continue to masturbate to this priceless work of art for a long time come as it does have Dong Expansion potential. Works such as these allow us to peacefully co-exist in this day and age of The Batsoup Virus. Allahspeed and amen to all the fine folk who've lost more than their cum in these recent times. As for me? I've been too far gone already a long, long time.

On of the better stories I've seen in recent time on here. Now don't get me wrong, Sagattoru-san has provided some pretty good ones lately, but overall what has come before with classics like "Mother it Has to be You!" by Horsetail and of course the legendary work by Pochi-san herself, "Ane Naru Mono" and other fantastic works which I cannot mention due to a lack of writing space here has set the bar just too damm high. What I absolutely loved about this specific Doujin was the fact that it portrayed that feeling of immorality through quite more so decently than many other Shotacon Doujin's I've had the chance to read lately, which end up shoving sex scenes in your face with a MILF and younger boy who's her son without any feeling of lustful, passionate guilt. Solid 8/10 based on the ending twist as well as how well thought out the plot was. Sad to say though, if you get rid of these two factors alongside how the lack of a blowjob/deepthroat scene hurts this overall as a whole.

@TheOnlyHentaiQween just you

what a nice ending lmao......

It's just a matter of time for ending all too.

kinda twisty

plot is happening here

What a tweest

Holy fuck, what a twist

Snap back to reality Lmao

Is it just me or shota and loli just turns me tf off… ew

I can't quite process the ending

That demon better be a tomboy

Praise the Sun

shota cringe

Despite how hot this was I feel like that surprise twist at the end was just straight unnecessary. Yuzuki should have just kept to the mystery of how protag-kun time travelled or maybe hinted that his attempted suicide lead him back to that point because his last thougts were of Aya maybe. That would have made for a sweet ending to this short story. Instead we get this gag surprise fantasy on the nose bullshit that is clearly just aping the isekai oversatutaion in Japan right now. Just beyond weird.

this should have 2nd part

What plot is this???????

What just happened

WHAT THE FUCK

I'm too dumb, can someone explain please

When doujin has better twist than most manga