[Kazbox (Kazma)] Jahy-sama wa Gaman shinai! | Jahy-sama won't hold back! (Jahy-sama wa Kujikenai!) [English] [Camel33] [Digital]

@camel33 I think your mistake was saying that you did a pretty good translation. That and that you put it in red coloring in front of the translation. Generally its better if you are more critical about yourself, and show that you want to improve. If someone finds mistakes in your translation then take the chance to fix them an update the gallery. I also started translating 8 months ago, even though I am not native in English and my Japanese is still very basic. at first I wanted to find a group where my translations would be proofread but I didn't find anyone so, I just uploaded it to E-hentai.org. But because I was showing that I was willing to improve the translation people kept making lists of grammatical and transation errors that I should fix. e-hentai. org/g/2335536/188e311424/ Don't loose your motivation because of some shit people on the internet say.

Wtf is this trash this is too relatable (9/10)

@camel33 honestly, don’t sweat it. If your heart’s not in it anymore, then it’s okay. If you still want to translate though, just go for it! Maybe try avoiding the other site? I know that some older guys in video game, card game, and anime niches can’t get over themselves, and are huge judgemental douchebags with inflated egos. I play Yugioh just for fun, and I see those types of guys at tournaments, and they’re just insufferable. The Reddit mod type of guys. Anyway, just do what you want to do instead of relying on feedback from online people, although that can be especially hard when you’re trying to post something for an online community. But don’t just take it from me. I’m just some random guy on the internet trying to be a bit nicer than the average internet dweller.

hey y’all, I wanted to ask, should I translate some of Kazma’s(artists) other works? It would be machine translation, but a C- is better than a missing assignment

The great jahy will NOT abstain! 😭🙏

Ahhh, she's horngy. ❤

@camel33 I only have a few comments about the translation. On the 13th page, that probably should’ve been translated as “CUMMING!!!” or something like that. In response to your concern on page 8, dojins/manga are read right to left at least 90% of the time. Just keep some semblance of sentence structure, along with how the characters speak in the original source material in mind as you translate. Also, final critique, on page 7, the top right should probably read, “I’m the great 2nd in command of the Demon Realm!” This is just something fresh in my mind, coming from the anime itself. Other than those few things, you did an incredible job. This translation is honestly better than quite a few “professional” level translations I’ve seen on this site. Your decensoring was really incredibly well done! I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us in the future. Best of luck to you friend!

Camel33 don't worry, your translation is nice ♥️ you've done a great job

For anyone else reading this, thanks to all of the people who cheered me up and favorited this. I’m really thankful. I redrew so much, and it was super hard, so I was sad when people on another site said some bad stuff about me/the translation. I spent so much time and effort translating, so I was a bit depressed when people insulted me. At one point, I stayed up to 6am translating/redrawing because I was having a ton of fun, but then I had to wake up at 8:15 and so I just drank an entire energy packet and trucked on LMAO. Anyways, I hope y’all had fun masturbating or whatever to this. Thanks for over 1k favorites <3

Cute jahy...

Jahy's so cute.

@camel33, sorry dude. It's the whole "pretty damn good" bit that triggers people. Maybe should've JUST implied it's your first time, people would've mainly just offered advice. But by undermining the actual skill and dedication translation requires you opened yourself up to major criticism. Again sorry, it's clear you're a fan of the series and meant no harm. Elitism sucks.

Thanks PrivateAssassin. I feel like they were being a bit too hard on me, but it still sucks. Like, if they are so pissed at me translating it wrong, then they should fucking translate it themselves, right? Anyway, maybe I’ll do a yearly post, no clue though. I was also gunna translate the other Kazma hentai, but seeing how that negative comment had like 200 likes, no clue. It’s just sad how I really tried my hardest but apparently all I did was mess it all up. It literally didn’t even change the quality of it too, like it’s still a great hentai and people said it fit with her character. No clue. Ima just take a rest from that other hentai community. I could always just say like “CamelShitTranslstions,” so they can’t complain as much about it being shit :p

oh hey translator, dont beat yourself up too much, the comedy of the comic masks some of the bad translation and its nice that you attempted to translate this one, maybe you would want to challenge yourself and make a yearly translation challenge? just a suggestion.

Oh, also it’s rated 1 star on there. Guess that’s a waste of 23 hours of my life. Have a good day. I hope you enjoyed it.

Hey, it’s the translator here. I don’t think I’ll be doing anything like this again. I do know the language somewhat, but I’m pretty horrible at it, and people on the site where I posted this were just saying my gallery is shit. Apparently I translated the gallery wrong(ex: apparently I translated silence at one point as “oh my god.”) It’s still great, it’s just sucks to hear the feedback. They said, and I quote “how can you possibly say you think you did a good job in translating if you don't know the language you're translating from? you're utterly incapable of determining whether you did a good job or not. spoiler: you didn't. you managed to bust up the very first page, and there isn't even any dialogue to screw up. you "translated" the sound of literal silence to "oh my god." you have no business doing any of this. go play a videogame the next time you get bored.” I guess just have fun with that. I’ll go back to lurking. People suck sometimes

Honestly, I can imagine her doing something like this. I really like how the author has her personality to a tee lmao

Lol, can't convince me it's not cannon

This really is something that will happen off-screen.