[Sanatsuki] - Towa Hypnosis

447554 has less typos (same 8 pages, but with a cover). Presumably the typos are because the manga was translated from Japanese to another language (i.e. Indonesian) and then to English. Have read manga which were translated that way.

Wish I could argue with the comments. I love this artist's work, but the translation is *really* poor (some stuff you have to reread 5 times). Most common error is the pronoun stuff, but there's plenty of other sentence-changing typos.

Needs the poor grammar tag

I can't understand shit

This "translation" is really bad

Cock semen? As opposed to all that vagina semen?

okay who google translated this