Dōkyūsei: Study with me

It's so lovely!

the guy needs a haircut bro

what software did you use? Clip Studio Paint have 3D model reference I think you can use it. and I think you need to see more references or training by tracing and modify

Thanks guys and ty @oneloliman I'll check it out.

Author is GOAT answering comments. Her hair is nice bc makes her stand out from the typical girls in doujins imo. Keep up the good work

What I like about this doujin is the girls hair. It looks like a bird hut lmao.

while the anatomy may not be the best, your work is promising, keep up the good work

It's definitely not the best, but I see the vision brother. Keep on practicing 💪

Another upload with two separate language tags despite being entirely in English?

Why the head is so big :v

i'll do my best. . .

@peepoo 👍

@CyStride first time I've seen an author actually comment on this site lol. Your anatomy's goofy but that's about expected for any amateur artist. The fact that you got a doujin done is pretty commendable itself. But if you want to push your art further you should really study art and anatomy fundamentals. It's a tedious thing to do but I promise you it's going to be worth it.

The plot is great but the anatomy is goofy ahh

Looks like the artist is middleschooler

for what it's worth, I, and likely not I alone, am here to see people's reactions to ONE levels of hair

@CyStride_VisualPro art isn't that much, but I'll give you a point for giving a quick but wholesome story. I'll give additional points if you add more hair to the girl though xD

@CyStride_VisualPro obv this one is pretty shite but don't worry bro. you're good. just keep cookin

unique in art style, can definitely tell this essentially first doujinshi.

@CyStride_VisualPro nice 1st entry! good to see another ss artist

let him cook🔥

lololol

@ CyStride_VisualPro the girl need more hair she is balding

@oki aki 2 hahaha. wym? private hair?

Not enough hair 0/10

@VyStride_VisualPro nice.

@lolixlol well...I don't know about you, but ultimately it's your decision whether or not you believe this is my original creation. The only proof i can provide is my twitter. Feel free to visit it: @CysVPro

@pena_inka yeah

this mf just steal faces from other doujins and put them in his shitty work

@CyStride_VisualPro Oh, is this your original work?

Edit: Ye. Sorry about the excessive hair guys.. Dw i'll fix that when I start drawing again. Thanks \( _ _ )/ I'll keep that in mind while making adjustments.

Assuming the below is real don't worry about I like sightseeing, it builds character

xDxDxD . .

Girl is growing a fucking forest up there

This looks like the result of a failed dad trying to make a doujin using an AI that was trained on his kids' drawings

That's some yugioh style of hair right there

it aint much but its honest work