[Dr. Stein] Smoking Hypnosis english rewrite

@KHLawrence it's rewrite because there are more on this one then the first. The first one has 128 pages and this one has 487.

And chapter 10 is out on author page ( and it's uploaded on here in chinese too not sure if complete ch. or just preview though) authors page has in Jap and Korean.... Still no English translation... tho I'm just gonna read it with machine translation later today...

Where to find the author's page there is no author written here

Preview of chapther 10 is up on author page .... looks like the friend gonna get cucked lol should expect the whole thing in the next 2 weeks maybe 3 to 4 for the English translation

Aww man... Why the time skip? It would be better if the author showed us the corruption process slowly.

The very famous "it hurts a little at first but".

if anyone knows more hypnosis stuff like this where a subliminal message is put into the lady's mind (or man's mind, I'm not picky) please hmu

@toshokan7 from what I can tell it seems like it’s mostly just a touch up of the author’s English version. Cleaned up sentences that were weirdly put like “Always fragrant your dick” to “Your dick always smells so delicious” and just changing awkward words like fragrant and fellatio, shit that nobody actually says in English lol

Interested to see how this rewrite reads.. The English in the original seemed not too bad I could understand ok but just kinda off. in parts ... Like a combination of Machine translate with a bit of translation instead of a true translation ... Of course the author did all this themselves in 3 languages for free so I really can't complain... Just hope this reads a bit more natural...

Gotta admit. I'm interested in seeing how far she ends up falling. And how much damage she does on the way down. Hope it ends with revenge/justice though but won't hold my breath.

what part was a rewrite? Seems pretty much the same as the translation the artist provides themselves

Interesting story ngl

This shit is good