(C84) [Catcher in the Rye (Kurokawa Juso)] GAMBIT - Ganbitto [English] ( FanTranslated)

The dude's trying so hard to write something dramatic but it came out as half-baked story because the character development rushed and so many plot holes. Should've been better if he wrote something simple cliche as "neighbor who sold his body because he's an orphan who has no money, but a good fellow help him and he fell in love" rather than this pretend to be post apocalyptic hero journey.

My god it’s Berserker Lancelot

I know this isn't going to be relevant to anyone else's comments, but what jag-off in Japan named their doujin group after a 1951 coming of age novel from America??? My brain just can't wrap around it.