(C102) [Dokudami (Okita Ababa)] Sewayaki na Osananajimi ga Dame Neet Aniki ni NTRreta Hanashi [Edit] [English] [Machine Translated]

Maybe the translation is THAT BAD but this only comes off as NTR If you think the Mc wanted the girl and not just validation for his initiative and ambition in life. If you think he wasn't just aiming for success in life to soite his brother. The idea of her being romantically with Mc involved is fleeting, he only thinks about it cause its said. The rest of the story is him hating his brother. I cam bet you if his brother got a girl at all he'd still hate it. Like I said in my earlier one, alot if unspoken context here, especially about the family dynamics at play. Makes me think the younger brother was exoected to lift his other brother up eventually, and was being compared to him by family. Which causes said resentment of having to even acknowledge his do nothing brother. Just my interpretation. This isn't REALLY ntr imo. Author should just go pro at this point.

I think the author kind of lost the sauce on this one. Doesn't seem to me that little bro like the girl, I'm fact she really has nothing to do with this. He wanted to not be or compared to his brother. Would love a backstory on them and how the little brother came to really resent him to the point he gets so mad, cause it's not about the girl. Maybe his brother left him alone and that's why he got mad? I feel like the "being seem as a handful" line is what hurt him. He was trying to be better- to be active, but the idea he was a do nothing crushed him. Ultimately, a one sided beef between brothers. I hope his big bro might come to find him- and help him in the future to not fall into the trap he did. Especially because the girl(now his wife) likely hates him and probably discourages associating. Would make for a really good slice of life/drama series.

I fucking love that it's all sketch at the end. . . .like broo

I thought this was Chitoge

Another ntr saved by the great comedy of machine translate

kinda wholesome. I wish the littlebrother wasnt in the story.

This would have been better if the artwork was finished and the story more detailed.

This would've been way better if the translation wasn't so bad, I know it's not easy translating but, still. They fucked it up. The younger brother was a complete dick and deserved this ntr, the older brother had a better redemption return to normal society thanks to the girls support. The girl was willing to support the younger brother but he fumbled that shit hard and the older brother caught the rebound and even managed to score big time. The art was good the all that scribble shit really ruined the flow of the story and scenes a lot. Hopefully they remake it again, other than that I give it a total of 6.5/10

Big Bro shoulda been the MC tbh

This glorious ntr makes up for the unfinished looking drawings

The artwork is unfinished, the translation is trash. It is netorare as even Aimi knows Kei would be hurt if he found out, she knows how close they where, that to some degree she is betraying him. He did find out in the most horrible way that Aimi who had supported him, who he thought of marring, is dating his brother. He just forced a quickie out of her, for her first, told her he kinda liked her, then she just rolled with it. Building her life on that and it worked. Kei seems to struggle after that, though it's unfinished, I can't tell at least. Losing his biggest love in such a inadvertently cruel way would be shocking. The real question is how did he take it between finding out and the last page? Unfinished and rushed.

tls gave me brain cancer

I love the way this author sketches their work. The artstyle is nice! Although, the rough sketch parts makes the doujin look unfinished

do all the shading only for it to look AI generated

xd was fun at least isnt material to make me fap but was fun , and hey for real are there dudes that weak minded? that cant recover from theyre first love being stolen? man there are 60% of women in the planet dunno why they think the life its over for a single girl

This could have been a masterpiece. Man I would pay for a complete version. Love the blonde hair ponytail with bowtie, it reminds me of Chitoge nisekoi

Not NTR... I mean the girl has been supporting the little brother, but that doesn't mean she like him romantically. And from the beginning, she already like the big brother and it seems they already dating for quite some time... It's just the sex that seems late (perhaps they are holding back).

@MasterEnd: Machine Translated

better than any other ntr story

Is it just me, or does the dialogue actually not make sense?

i hope the author takes the time to finish this some day! i really liked it for the characters

Y'all brutal on the art and scanning. It's actually enjoyable to read unlike typical doujin slop. the NTR aspect is weak and it shouldn't get the tag, but I see why someone might put it here.

@rossa567 It's not technically NTR, it's "BSS" which is more of like an adjacent subcategory

@Ellaina lol

Garbage art for half the doujinshi

@Ellaina someone coping

Not really netorare they don't have relationship

I don't think this completed....it was interesting tho what's left of it

Gg translate hm :v :v :v

It's called karma, anyway the guy is a leftover, who cares

tbh, not very fappable in this condition, but not only as an ntr but in general has an interesting story and character traits. 7/10

I really enjoyed this. Kind of wish the author can take his time to redraw the unfinished pages though.

at first i thought that was chitoge

the less fictional ntr

Well it not bad though this kind of ntr the person that the girl love is the older brother not the younger

fellas, is it really ntr if the character barely appeared

it's not bad.

is this ntr? we barely see the friend also the bro and sis were already dating and got married

The translation match the work.

The quality speaks for itself lmfao

so basically the author is the faqing little brother who can't even finish the doujin properly

Kind girl my ass, she making a big fuss when big brother self destruction but doesn't give a two shit when little brother who she ruining him become mess because of her, she is cruel and heartless girl.

Bruh, finish the sketches...

Why doesn't the author just finish those pages?

i feel that this is barely ntr