[EroRhythm (NiwaRhythm)] Yozora no Tsuki ga Ochiru made | Until The Moon In The Night Sky Falls [English] [ApricotJam]

what does "until the moon in the night sky falls" mean????????

trash plot

coach: we don't need a pair of lovebirds hanging around here...sorry but i'm kicking you two out girl: ok. bye. coach: eh? *end* it's just common sense but common sense doesn't apply in ntr so ┐(￣ヘ￣)┌

Anyone calling this peak loves trash. The blackmail is a joke and per usual we can't have a mentally strong FML. Ntr truly is the garbage of hentai.

Damn I'm a few months late witnessing this peak

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Okay I'm getting real tired of NTR at this point, lol. It just doesn't make sense that she would keep listening to the coach after the first day. I've seen people argue that it makes sense in other stories because of Mind Break, but she wasn't even Mind Broken at literally any point in this story It just kind of sucks

I can handle retarded NTR but this Judo is ass. Countering Kosoto Gari with Kata Guruma shouldnt work, and he didn't get his head under the armpit making the throw a fucked up morote not a Kata Guruma. Also if she were a high grade she would actually know how to feint, you throw your head back as if to go for a forward throw but then move into the uke for Kosoto or ideally something that isnt shit like a ko uchi makikomi. A good Kosoto would be one like Kaori Matsumoto's ippon vs Juul Franssen in the -57kg eliminations in the IJF Grand Prix

Same old dumbass NTR plot like the others. Without the art, this would be nothing. I don't get why NTR lovers hold the genre up so much, it's like the same 5 plots over and over again. At least reverse NTR mixes it up a little but this was bog standard NTR with the same old formulaic crap story.

this is the most generic NTR I’ve ever read but hey big titties are big titties

Damn rip twin🤦🏽

Should have gone a little longer with her showing more signs of corruption.

lmao. get kicked out of a stupid dojo or become corrupted and cheat on my boyfriend hmm. ill choose the latter. this story smh

I won’t turn away a good tomboy ntr but I do agree with everyone else in the comments that this type of trope with the martial arts girl is pretty common now so we kind of already know what to expect

"this club has a long revered tradition of judo. we don't need a pair of lovebirds hanging around. we're kicking you two out." "okay. bye." end. seriously, i enjoy the art of ntr works but the majority of them lacks common sense with the story side. just goes to show how much of an idealisitc fantasy these creators have when making ntr works.

This story is reused so much

so goodddd

Art's really good, plot's basic but the bf isn't fleshed out, so it's fine if? Probably going to the top 5.

Ntr needs more criativity, I feel like I've read this before countless times

So fucking good. Can’t wait for part 2. Fuck all these haters bitching in the comments.

I agree that this another stupid karate ntr it's the same boring story over and over 😴

as always another piece of shit with a karate-girl vs a fucking Macho boring as fuck