[Yamada Rimuru] Bell-Ryuu Ecchi na Manga | Is It Wrong To Make Ryu Happy In The Past? (Dungeon ni Deai o Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru Darou ka) [English]

My glad what the fuck is Shadow saying

Genuinely, Shadow-sama spitting facts. Fair art, poor plot and terrible assassination of Bell.

what the fuck does that mean, cid kagenou

- that the sexual intercourse that follows feels as if it may as well be rape. It feels unearned and lacking in passion. Besides the inaccuracies, the standalone plot is fairly cheap and generic. Not fucking atomic at all, 2/10. The only conceivable way it could be worse in my imagination is if the author self-inserted themselves and had sex with Ryuu instead, leaving Bell to cry in the corner. However, I feel that even that would be a more accurate characterization of Bell Cranel. To make it worse then would involve having Bell join in to rape her. Regardless, considering the art, translation, and content of the story, I give the above doujinshi an overall rating of 4/10, would not read again. Farewell.

-nd appearance of the text is satisfactory. Therefore, I shall rate the quality of the translation as 10/10. Most importantly, comes my rating of the story itself. Being limited to 13 pages of story, it can be easily concluded that there is not enough room to have much of a plot. However, in my own viewing there is a possibility that there may be additional context to this story that I am uninformed on. In that case, the story fails to point to direct the reader to it. The reason I question if there is some missing context is because the behavior of Bell Cranel in this work is severely unusual. His eagerness to engage in sexual activity with Ryuu with zero hesitation or nervousness appears to be such a gross mischaracterization of Bell that it annihilates any familiarity with him and the story that I have developed from viewing the original series. It is a different character and you made him a whore. On the other hand, Ryuu's acceptance of the situation is far too easy and contrived,-

Hello all. For the objectively 0 individuals who will read this message that I bring forth to you, I humbly present this full, non-comprehensive review of the doujinshi presented above (#490133). To give unnecessary context, I personally very much enjoy Ryuu Lion as a character, especially in terms of physical appearance, given that most of the characters in the relevant series are generally likable. Being essentially the only translated doujinshi featuring solely Ryuu Lion, I peered upon this story with high hopes. Thus, I present this review and rating. To begin with, the first and foremost noticeable feature would be the quality of the art. It is nothing extraordinary, and in some areas seems a little odd. The appearance and proportions of the characters does not seem too unreasonable either, and therefore I give the art a rating of 8/10. As for the translation, I have not familiarized myself with the original material, and therefore cannot vouch for its accuracy, but the grammar a-

Last pic is burst nuts

The start was amazing, but that was the only part I liked; the following page was standard porn...like, what the hell?!? Explore a bit more her feelings, have Bell console and care for her, do some foreplay before jumping straight to sex! a few pages of wholesome interactions were not going to kill the author.. also, the final scene on Riviera was absolutely unnecessary, instead a bit of aftercare with Ryuu cuddling would have been perfect.

Awful story. Hey, Ryuu, you see me the first time, lets fuck. Okay. wtf

Happy ending

This was wholesome AF my dude

😻😻😻😻😻

Who tf made the story

Last season I decided to root for this ship despite the unlikelyhood so this is a surprise to be sure but a welcome one

Fucking Kino

Yeah hope it longer thou but this is good

That art really baiting some NTR

if someone already stop this anime at s2, just keep continue watching until reach s4 part1 & 2. thank you

really hoped it would be longer still nice tho first Ryuu doujin i will take it

Honestly, based on the cover, I thought this was gonna be made by terasu mc.

Finally, someone started to translated this Astrea familia obsessed author's work.

Holy cow, thats hot

YESSSSSSSS

Wish there was more to it but glad other females are appearing. So much hestia it starts to get boring

Bro got same cock as me

What a terrible way to ship them together. It’s so vacant

truly someone cooked

That cover is incredibly baity, considering how underwhelming the whole thing is... smh.

nice art

Shiii is firee🔥🔥🔥🔥☝️☝️☝️☝️📢📢📢📢💯💯💯💯🥵🥵🥵🥵

wholesome albeit short danmachi doujin, based