[Nanamorin] Shujinko wa dou Nou Hakai Saseru no ka? | How will the Protagonist's Brain be destroyed? [Chinese]

i read the comments and it seems like the fmc is a hypocrite while mc is a cuck who cant move on... seems like a typical ntr story

看完很想留言，一般不留的。 这故事对我来说其实不太算ntr，因为男女主别说关系甚至连感情都还没确认，第二男也反复和男主说过女主是目标，男主太废了看的我红温了好几次，完全自己作的。最后受伤的还是女主而已，男主看的我想把这人删掉算了，吃了屎一般的难受。 个人感觉稍微修改一下会让故事本身不那么悲剧甚至看的比较舒服。 1. 第二男删掉两点特色，爱偷拍别人和渣，改掉这两点这人就是下流了些但完全能接受，还挺积极会顾虑人不大男人主义也不自我，比男主好多了。就是有这两点所以是悲剧，毕竟弄出人命了。(其实以套路会有的黄毛来说算还是个人了) 2. 为了打炮撒谎这个勉强能留(女主还喜欢男主的时候其实怎样都牵强XD 女主会有把处女先给男主的想法还算作者当个人)，偷拍可以改成只拍男二和女主(取得同意那种)，不然后面男主发现不了，结局走向也要改。 3. 关于男主，可以不用改，甚至拒绝献处那段，一样是个对男主失望的分歧点，才转而喜欢男二。(男二屌还大，后面技术练上来，器大活好，加上我的修改建议的话， 怎么输？非常合理还算转投更好的怀抱， 就是可惜...) 4. 一样能搞怀孕，男二认真给承诺就行(基本就是把男二改成好色和会用手段有点心机的普通小好人啦)，然后结局也可以不用变，男主无能狂怒而出手，反而变成男主ntr男二，反正也没画出来，ntr标签可以不用摘，你还看不到ntr的部分，靠你自己想象，这不更新鲜更妙? 当然是不改太多又想变好的情况下，不然直接画别的作品吧。 上面是我想把这部作品改的稍微好些的想法，因为这次蛮投入，人设也不错(不包括性格)剧情也长，我的体验很妙，有点愤愤不平XD (我的tomboy你给我改没了？！) A slightly serious review and suggestions from my personal perspective for this doujinshi to avoid tragedy or get a bit better for those who are not really fond of ntr genre but accept it. Can translate it if you are curious, just lazy to type again and hope to share my opinion. Haha

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No, the ntr guy is not an stranger but a 2nd childhood friend, a later one. It happens she lately passes the time with him more than mc. The mc wanted to go with her but she denied him and teased him instead... The ntr guy has a crush with fmc (only because she became plump, more feminine and that); however, let's not forget the ntr guy is a molester and also opportunistic liar... [This is just an speculation->] Since the finale is pretty open, I can assume fmc realized she got fooled twice. Since the recorder was in her bedroom, she realized too late: she got cheated with other female classmates before and now she's doomed. Unfortunately (for the mc), fmc couldn't do anything BUT to get pissed off and put all the blame on mc for it, for the mess she got by herself into. Otherwise, she wouldn't come to his bedroom and move on with the ntr guy without caring about the mc instead.

It's very hurt. If you aren't talk about your feeling to your target know, it's impossible to know the feeling each other. In good way you dodge a bullet but in bad way you lost a girl who you love to another guy. Although you hit her or kill her it isn't help you much. It's hard to make it but you must to move on from her and surpass from it. It's sad but you must to strong, boy. She choose this way by herself. That all. I hope her bf cheating her and break up with her.

¿WTF was this ending?.

The fmc is hypocrite. The mc liked her and fmc knew about it. She teased him about being jealous in first place but she couldn't stand being teased back. She did all this out of anger and thirst for sex, she was pretty aware about it when she opened to the ntr guy. Imo, if she truly loved the mc, she would had just said no to the ntr guy without second thoughts ("I'll think about it.") and stay far from him. But, no. Instead, she agreed with ntr guy's wish and idea to record their intimacy expecting the mc to find out about it (another tease). She clearly said she was prepared for it when she went to confront the mc. And also, she said it’s embarrassing to ask for sex although the things she did with ntr guy? (Really!?) Plus, she forgives the ntr guy’s assaults but not the mc? Just because the mc hurt her feelings from being teased back , and said no to her whim? She could just try again before he fell asleep, duh.

男主自己蠢 被NTR很合理

Even if mc confessed or accepted her, she was about to cheat on him anyways. She was willing to fulfill the ntr guy’s wish, even she acknowledge he’s handsome and can get a cute girl instead of her.

@seighart123 is a fag who sucks dicks

幸好男主不是结婚后才发现

It's not even NTR lol The guy and girl is not in a relationship they are just childhood friend The blonde guy only won the girl it's just a normal dumb guy that never confess until he lose the girl lmao

The mc could’ve just upload the videos to internet and expose them or blackmail the fmc but no, he decided to fap to it and so on waiting the inevitable. Revenge ntr are rares, nevertheless we really need a tag for it because they do exist here and some are just a move on.

What a dumbass ending. The whole plot is formulaic, how many times have we seen it? Most likely the protagonist got his ass kicked and remained an outsider. The only thing that might be unexpected is some kind of revenge where he did some violence. But we won't know that... Why did author spend 150 (!) pages drawing this.

@gonza2585 El chico ntr le dijo a la chica que se grabara teniendo sexo con él mientras expresaba lo que sentía entonces ella lo hizo y dijo el resto, y que todo cambió y que sea feliz con otra... Después de que el prota viera todo eso que es la última grabación creo, la chica entra en su cuarto para confontrarlo ya que el prota no respondía sus mensajes hace buen tiempo y ella sospechó que algo estaba pasando. Ella dijo que está preparada para lo que fuera a suceder entonces el prota la ataca y asumo que quedó inconciente. Recuerda que la chica sabe pelear y dar buenas patadas, probablemente lo noqueó, porque el chico dijo que no pudo controlarse y fue hacia ella y todo se puso oscuro, no recuerda nada. En mi opinión el prota perdió la oportunidad pero también la chica tenía intenciones de hacerlo con el chico ntr después de que la chica tuviera su primera vez con el prota y creo que la chica tenía un hobby de exhibicionismo en internet, algo que el prota no sabía.

女方和黃毛都是腳踏2條船的心，還好苦主不是結婚後才發現w

@gonza2585 我想可能是女主放在那里的。虽然剧情上感觉是黄毛忘了，但是结合女主突然出去和最后一格说的话，感觉可能是女主故意让男主知道的

每次看这些青梅竹马类又打着ntr tag的本子，我都在想，这真的是ntr吗。男主甚至不是她的男友，只是一直从小在一起，一起长大，便觉得会一直在一起，会觉得自己不表白也没关系。 然后女主跟黄毛成了恋人又会自顾自破防。

Que le dijo al prota al final la chica?

Ese es el fin? Que le dijo dijo la chica que hizo que prota rabiara? Seguro le dijo algo feo cuando es ella que a estado ocultando que sale con otro en sus narices. Se vio que el rubio sale con mas chicas igual la zorra esta con el.