[Onigensou] The Final Dungeon Boss Can't Be This Easy To Defeat?! (Oumiya Emma)

1. is character attractive? 2. is story realistic? 3. Is there aftercare? 4. does the girl act realistically towards cock? this is how i filter doujin

We will the part 2 be coming

@TheBFame go enjoy your ntr cuck

This mid garbage is number one on the vtuber tag. Holy fuck you all have garbage taste.

@SunsetInZero Hey man thanks for writing this, appreciate it.

Also, the contract part was supposed to involve him manifesting an actual quill and parchment contract and when she signed it, her chain would go into his hands. No idea why she changed it to how it is now. But yeah, that’s what I have off the top of my head. Anyone want to know anything else, just ask.

In the first draft, I actually also had her use Dark Firaga. It’s also Riku’s and it’s also really badass. The Hero also had a spear class change and used an attack like Tao Ren from Shaman King, but that got cut for brevity. She was only going to make this thing 12 pages at first, but after Duke and I told her that was way too short, she bumped it up to 18. This is actually the 4th revision. The second revision (written by Emma) was 12 pages of setup with a date on the town and everything, with only about 3-5 pages of actual sex. I like story-based stuff quite a bit, but that was obviously too much. The 3rd revision was basically this, but she added in the spanking stuff and the chocolate bit. Personally, I thought it was funny, but afaik she never said she liked chocolate all that much before that.

Hey guys, I wanted to come back from the dead for a second to give you some behind-the-scenes trivia. Emma didn't credit me, but I am in fact the writer of this doujin. I hated having to write her own porn for her, but she was just... *really* bad at writing it herself. In fact, you can see each instance where she changed the script I wrote, because every spot where it was changed has terrible English (can we get that tag added, btw?). Now onto the trivia. Since the first draft, the doujin has always ended with the "Please Enter a Name" prompt. I thought it was a really cool way to personalize the doujin to each Emmate who read it, like it's YOU who's in the doujin. The Dark Shield was also pulled straight from KH2 (it's one of Riku's commands in TWTNW), but I figured it fit Emma since she gives off a darkness-allied vibe. In the original draft, she actually wins the fight (since she's a final dungeon boss, I thought she'd want to flex her power scale, but she insisted that she lose)

This is... Surprisingly wholesome

Imma be real with ya Boss, you ain't beating the lewd allegations

Good stuff

YEAYYY FINALY THE DOUJIN HAPPENED

peak emma

#1 of ALLL Time baybeeeeeee

YYYYYYYYYYREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#2 baybeeeeeee!

Surprisingly good writing.

Biggest Emma W

Lower than mid af. Holy fuck is this overhyped and overrated.

i need to fuck a hag!!!

Now this, this is a real self insert (amazing Emma I need more now Hag💅)

Mid af

Peeeeaaaakkkk!!!!

Yep, this is peak Emma. Glad i came

Emma is such a goat for this 🙏

#3 of all time mind you

10/10 lmao made by the person themselves

Mfers mad at peak in these comments, been here for years and never seen a comment section so mad at a clear W.

Emma ayoooooo

Why this garbage has so much like?

The hype about it on twitter is hella annoying do we NOT have a bunch of porn of vtubers already or something? ;>_>

I like the artstyle

10/10. Lmao that last page was funny.

Why the title feels like there's an anime of it

w work lmfso

This is peak. 10/10

people complaining like they paid for this stuff

The complaints I can tell aren't genuine. What is at least genuine is how much clout you're willing to chase to make asses out of yourselves.

I dunno what these mfs are yapping about, this is the artist's first doujin? Then dang that's pretty good for a first time. Mfs out here expecting a butcha-u or shindoL tier doujin lmaaoooo It's decent, not mid, not peak neither It's good. 8/10 Give her fat titties like that but not even do a paizuri smh

Look at all those people who feel like they are winning internet points by complaining.

She's seen it, in fact she still seeing it

Good but need to have more tit sucking and kissing. That would make this thing 10 out of 10.

Mid, too short. Can be improved - Isn't unsalvageable like a lot of garbage on here.

mid af

A pretty good start

Very well made for their first doujin! Also Emma YIPPE!

All that twitter hype and it’s mid….

Why does she look similar 🤔🤔

Lol Nice

came from twitter to see the hype, pretty mid in all honesty