[Ofuton de Suyaa (Mitsudoue)] Mukatsuku Onna o Saimin de Juujun ni Shite Dekachichi Harem o Tsukuru Hanashi [English] [Kaniyekun]

This is just really fucking sad wtf

only thing more incel than hypnosis junk is whining about the girls being used goods (not that I really mind the low-effort story in this to begin with, but virtue whining about it makes you retarded)

good art but shitty story with most of the girls being used goods

What a lackluster ass story man

shit ass story fuck man

The Translations kinda make this messed up

This would’ve been better if it weren’t for the fact that literally ALL of the girls are used goods.

Let's go. More MTL on trending.

There’s bad, then there’s incel bad

I don't mind the mid plot at all, yall not realizing how crazy the art is.

It would've been nice if it has a better translation...

Goddamn hot

Oh hell no, this is why we need a thumbs down button!

I don’t fw this

Gapapa yg penting gambarnya bagus👍

sorry chat, I dunno how I feel about this one

good art but shit story

shit like this is creepy asl

Nice.

Man idk why hypnosis is so popular it's lazy writing imo ntr is kinda better at least and I'm a vanilla enjoyer lol

Hypnosis never be creative in whatsoever, It's almost exact same thing as ntr genre, everything was too fucking easy

Uh... the hypnosis was way too fucking easy and the dude have no creative ways of abusing it that reading it evoke no excitement whatsoever. Why cant he do something like, a pet play, doing it out in the open, doing it randomly like its normal, doing it in front of their rival and made them traumatized without any memory of it, doing it in the public then made them conscious but unable to do anything, manipulating them to actually beg outside of hypnosis, oyakodon, anything?

One of the greatest, one bad thing about it is that it ends lol

Great tanned gyaru and she's wasted on a shitty hypnosis plot. This is disgusting and fucked up.

Meh nothing special

The moment this get a proper translation I dropped this in a heartbeat, till then...

Really like this one

The previous one was good, why must you make this one so fucking shite?

😻😻😻😻😻

This dude is like Chin. His doujins are always so good. Because their designs are both hot and cute

I guess I just expected Hypnosis Crisis level of story

I thought the gray haired girl was the same one from the beginning. And I thought the manager was the fat guy. So I thought they were going to "fight" over control over the girl

@crispy socc under dabed It stands for 'machine translation'. Kind of like Google Translate but usually a little better but not by much. It's looked down on because machine translations tend to be stilted, mix up 'you' and 'I' and the like and the words look pasted on. This one ain't that bad, a couple of lines are attributed to the wrong guy. But a hand translation is still the best.

Translating was okay, there are others way worse than this so no need to trash it lol. Anyways the story has all the cliche girls but at least the main guy isn't a super ugly bastard for no reason lol.

I think hypnosis has been overuse cuz it aint interesting anymore.

More MTL garbage

mtl aka Machine translation.

can I ask what's a mtl is? I just wanna understand what the other comments mean here

Yeah, the moment this site starts being content with MTLs, it's fucking over. You retards will eat dog feces if it was served to you on a plate.

MTL is kinda getting good that it's concerning...

Need a part 2 dawg

Meh kind of mid

damn

it is a good translation for mtl. hope to see this guy mtl more.

Surprisingly good for a mtl, still noticed errors, but most of them were just grammatical errors. One or two just didn't make any sense.

MTL lets Fking gooo! Here's to hoping more untranslated works get MTL

@henta1lover You are off your rocker if you think this shit "isn't bad". Give MTLs an inch and they'll take a mile.

nice

Well that was fast

This mtl is actually not bad, they're improving