[Shirabe Shiki] Ojousama to Nemuri Saru 10

Oh, people already found out lol! I wasted $3 bucks on it when I should have trusted what I knew to be true. When you see 30 pages you're like "no way, did he really go all out?", but then I saw 'CG' and kinda knew then.

I have bad news, people. The last one is not at all what you'll expect and is the most vanilla you an imagine. Just...wait until someone uploads it, but I'll say it's not worth it.

@dannys: I don't think girls were the problem, but the story, at least for Shirabe. He lost interest in the middle of it and if you see in every chapter there's always something less, a "X-moments later" timeskip, as well sudden scenes like with the knight and later the fight against goblins. I'll personally ignore this chapter and consider the 9th as the last one, because you can't call a story "The young lady and the sleeping monkey" and decide to end the story with a random dude no one knows. Also in the very last picture the monkey has even more tails, so U-Chan fucked her, the knight and other women even more in order to evolve, but there's nothing about it, not even a scene. Indeed a shame it ended like that.

I saw the last chapter and I am immensely disappointed. I had already commented in my analysis of the previous chapter how disappointing chapters 9 and 10 were for not focusing on U-chan. I believed that the author would try to correct the bad decision of the last chapters by closing the story with a chapter entirely focused on U-chan together with the princess and the warrior, at least that was what I had implied with the panel in the previous chapter, but he managed to do something unbelievable even for the most pessimistic fan of the work, a completely useless chapter about the princess with a random guy with 90% of the pages with the princess at the same angle and still poorly drawn (blatant laziness). It's sad that one of the works of this style that I've enjoyed the most in recent times had such a disappointing final stretch, I regret having waited with expectations every month for each chapter, unfortunately it was a waste of time.

https://akuma.moe/?q=artist%3A%22shirabe%20shiki%22%24 There you go. Someone shared it in Korean, but still DISAPPOINTED, extremely DISAPPOINTED. I was expecting 31 pages of the monkey banging and knocking those girls up and instead it's just a scene with multiple panels of a random guy fucking the princess. The monkey appears just in the last panel and does NOTHING. No idea why the author completely ruined the scenario in the end. FUCKING CHRIST.

Btw did the monkey evolve in this chapter!? I see 2 tails.

I'm still waiting for them to get pregnant

Love this fucking monkey

U-chan, you might not be the best of angels, but you aren’t the worst, thank you for not letting this end with goblins.

Below is my opinion divided into 3 parts about this work that was my favorite by Shirabe Shiki up to a certain point (Read part 1 first, then part 2 and finally part 3).

(Part 3): In my opinion, this concept of "addiction" should have been developed from the beginning of the work through U-chan with the heroines trying to understand what was happening with the hormonal changes in their bodies, until they completely give in to U-chan with awareness of their actions, without another male, only U-chan starring in these scenes. Now about the art: It clearly declined a lot compared to the first chapters, many scenes look like "sketch" because they don't seem to have been completely finished, but I think it's acceptable, since Shirabe-san wanted to deliver these chapters within the time imposed on himself, a very positive point is that in these last chapters the facial expressions were incredible (especially in this chapter with the warrior), but it was sad that there was this improvement right when the scene was not starring U-chan but rather a goblin.

(Part 2): with the two of them together, which is what will happen in the next chapter), but then the goblins plot came along and for me it ruined everything. This route was not necessary to create the development of the "threesome" scene. I believe Shirabe-san thought that a climax with action would raise the level of the work, but he must not have been able to think of how to insert sex scenes in these chapters starring U-chan, and since at least 1 of these scenes per chapter was necessary, he had to sacrifice the warrior with goblins. What personally irritated me the most was that the only scene where one of the heroines is conscious was with goblins and not with U-chan who is the protagonist. In other words, the warrior believes that her first time was with Goblins and she became addicted because of them, from what was implied in a panel in this chapter where she was touching herself before the princess entered the room. +

(Part 1): It's sad to know that it's nearing its end, but it was clear that Shirabe Shiki was already out of patience or ideas with this work, which I think is a shame, because for me it was the best idea he ever had. Now a critical analysis of the narrative about where it started to decline: From the chapter where he started to focus on the warrior, that is, from chapter 8 (I was really waiting for her turn, but not like this), he simply skipped all the development of how U-chan got to that moment with the warrior, he could have created a development like it was in the first chapters with the princess, everything gave the impression that the events of chapter 8 was not the chapter where U-chan's adventures with the warrior began, it was just another day of his interaction with her. When the author did this I even found it acceptable because he probably wanted to rush to a conclusion in the next chapter (probably U-chan "interacting" +

this is god monkey lol

@enigmadark: unfortunately I noticed that too. First chapters were way better, guess he lost interest in this specific story.

@pppekas5 you can use BitCash. Choose the BitCash option on Fantia for Toracoin, then choose to pay BitCash using a code. You can buy the codes from SEAGM. After you've done all that, your fantia Toracoin should be updated instantly.

@Bananararama999 artist updates monthly. Next chapter should be the last one. Hope theres a whole load of monkey action, but we'll have to wait till like the 28th of Nov to see.

@Bananararama999 I read that also, but if that's true, he's winging it. As an artist, I like his work, but the story direction clearly lost. The teasing should have ended a chapter or so ago and it's not like there was story to be had. Not going to be waiting on it this time.

This was good! I'm glad the story turned this way and that the author will continue it for ine more chapter, I guess. Let's cross fingers and hope the next chapter is focused on sex scenes now they are like a threesome. I'm willing to support the author but Fantia doesn't like my filthy VISA Money. Do you know a way to officially buy this through another service? The author needs motivation

wait what @EnigmaDark you fr? I didn't know this was the last chapter series thing at all bro, aweeee man that sucks, left on a cling hanger, if it is confirmed to be the last then I hope he comes back at some point to continue it like a second season of sorts

WOOahh phew thats good, I dongt mind this chapter too much honestly, I was worried it would lead to the monkey losing and another one of the typical Orcs/Goblin victory which would be boring but im glad it monkey used his magic stuff

Mid. Not enough monkey.

@enigmadark: there should be another chapter left. I just translated the Fantia page: "It will continue for just a little longer, just 1mm(suppose month?)".

You guys forget this was the last one?

Please keep up the good work, you'll be doing your fans a huge 🙏🤝

Fucking glad he continues this series man