[Material Engine (Materia)] Reizoku no Kubiwa Akogare no Rikujoubu Senpai o Toraete Jibun no Konomi ni Sennou Choukyou | I Claimed my Beloved Track-and-Field Senpai and Brainwashed her into my Perfect Woman [English]

Uh? So the mc is into puppet

wtf bruh, mc is trash

ABSOLUTE CINEMA ✋🏻😎🤚🏻

It would've been better if she'd turn into his personal loyal nympho but... Rather making her into a lobotomized breeding sex doll? Nahh

i love this, it's enjoyable

I'd add something, but the other comments summed it up pretty well. Not a surprising ending, but it's not really a fluid or enjoyable one either.

I mean it's alright

This became more and more stupid as it ended, and the art quality isn't that great ihmo

Really? Going with THAT ending? Terrible. Shit.

If ending was better it couldve been good

Stupid ending. Brought this down from decent to pretty mid

Preach it brothers. It's mid

It was decent until the last page. Meh...

if you turn the chick you like into a brainless doll did you actually even really like her at all or were you just horny

So.. the ending means that they had sex or whatever since apparently she was fine with it but I guess she must have wanted something else along the line and he put the collar back on her... bruh

ending was going good then you fcked up with the last page. meh

Mid af.

Very mid. Feels ai generated.

We need a part 2

Mid.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

it was good when it doesn't wear the collar but now it ruined at end why so he see woman as object the mc was garbage from the start

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Man this could have been such a good fuck!ng love story if it werent for the collar and well the site this is on. A shy kid helping his crush become the best athlete in school. And who knows maybe she helps him with the fact he gets bullied. I dont know about the rest of you but id read such a manga/comic/story/whatever.

Art is pretty nice story was kinda eh throughout but not bad 5/10

This is just vile

...well, this is what she wanted and even told him to keep going with it, so... happy ending... I guess...

This shit is so ass

😻😻😻😻

Normally I cum then leave, but this writing is so bad I have to comment instead. Idgaf about morals, it's just the pure cringiness and mind-numbing of the dialogues and action sequence gave me a brain tumor. Anyone that think this shit is remotely good, check if there's a collar on you, it's giving you "Decreased intelligence." Be ashamed for having no taste.

no way it's the "I'm so sorry senpai" rizz

Lmao Its peam

10/10 on the awesome scale

still, but i need ntr

"I will look after you!" *rapes her till she breaks* -I love this!-

as always commentcels hate an actual happy ending

Hope there's prequils and sequils to this. Bro possessed his sister before this and we don't know the details? We need the lore!

An ending is quite wholesome! Girl is totally mind broken, and Guy is happy with it!

Emotionless hypno is boring, but good art and all's well that ends well? Get rid of the collar tho

I don't give a shit what anyone would say. That's going to my top 10 codes of all time. IT WAS SO FUCKING GOOD

TBH awesome story and I was really hoping for a good ending (which is extremelly rare for mind control stories). Can we all agree to just ignore the time skip in the last pages? Or at least imagine that she DONT wear the collar + there's no decreased intelligence.

Good art. Shame about the story and the ending. At least in the earlier scenes, her facial expressions could imply enough awareness to hate what's happening, even if the text says "emotion suppression."

It was so close! I thought it would end on a happy note, but no! The collar stays on, missed opportunity for a batter ending.

peak "not everyone who get bullied is a good person, sometimes they deserve it"

Brother, you are a disappointment. The modifications you did made her worse. You could’ve been happy together, but NO YOU WANT A FCKING SEX DOLL. If you want a faphole clone her you idiot

putting decreased intelligence at the end really tells you that you can go lower than low, with this already being a hypno doujin AND there already being a good ending right before the time skip

yet another one with some sad ssack worthless shit stain joke of a male who nobody will ever want cause lets be real what chick would ever want some weak ass piss any loser to come within 10ft of her so tada mind control rape the most pathetic sadest lamest loser fetish a doujin has ever printed.

Kenapa disini rame

Guys sorry for the out of place comment... But I need help.. I'm trying to find the doujin where the girl want to take her childhood friend virginity so she offer herself no knowing the guy is no longer a virgin... Then she cried knowing she's the only one saving her virginity for him so he fucked her and they become a couple at the end.. I think its loss on the purge so if u guys can give me a new code or title that will be helpful thanks..

As per usual, mid fucking ending. It was going so well but the author just had to ruin it, leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

last few chapters are a massive L☠️