[Original Rewrite] [Terasu MC] Gotoubun no Hanayome Tashimai de Harem Tsukutteru Otoko ni NTRru Yotsuba (Gotoubun no Hanayome) [English] [Forbidden Eden]

Should have made the "bull" their little brother that way making it into incest.

you didn't really "de-NTR" anything, you just made it from the bull's perspective.

@buttnutz why does there have to be a loser cuck in the first place? I don't want dogshit on my lawn

Bruh doujin

This is petty. But good lord can I call out one guy in the comment section? Netorare is literally fcking Incel fantasy. Almost all netorare is about disrespecting women and turning them into mindless sex slaves who don't care about being respected as a person or someone lover... the fck he means this becomes an incels fantasy because it becomes a harem rewrite... good lord do Netorare Bulls fan thinks they are doing a good thing wishing women are complete sex slave sluts? Its your own wishes not a real wish of any average woman in the world. Literal show any netorare to an average feminist they'd think yall incels.

This is just petty, look I dont want this doujin either, but changing the entire story to fit your narrative is so petty. If you really wanted a better Goutobun doujin, one that has no NTR, go read 4why 🤷‍♂️

@animepopcorn_ I get your point, but this is kinda just the cycle of the gooners on this website. People get mad at ntr, then they get mad at people getting mad at ntr, and pretty soon if enough people start parroting you instead of thinking of something original, then we'll have people getting mad at people getting mad at people getting mad at ntr. It's all bullshit. We're all just trying to distract ourselves from the fact that cuck or no, we spend more time thinking about drawn porn than actual women.

Just came to say that letting NTR live rent free in your head to the point that you rewrite an NTR doujin is more cucky than just liking NTR. Which is impressive in a way.

What's the point of the rewrite when you can still see it's not the same person by just looking at the hair of the dude in the last page

Yikes. To be clear I agree that the original was better, but people losing their minds in the comments is even worse. You can just not click my guy.

Actually disgusting, even the NTR was better. WTF is this shit?

I mean, this is still NTR, but it's netori. And it's not that bad for a rewrite. I don't know what people are complaining about.

rewriting a doujin is such cuck behavior

weak vanilla people somehow keeps comsuming ntr content and blame others for it. now they going through such lengths of expressing self hate

This thinga is worse

Rewriter is retard

wtf, naw this sucks. The ntr was better.

id rather off myself than read this

Lol wtf is this monologue trash XD

It just went from ntr to an incel's harem fantasy. Gross ass monologuing.

Oh, I am sorry that when I see a person getting one of the worst types of mental trauma, I sympathize with them, I have yet to go thorugh the procedure to remove my soul and heart from my body

Or y'know, you don't self insert as the cuck to begin with and not have the NTR aspect living rent free in your head to the point you gotta make a rewrite. What's the point?

Another nice rewrite! Keep up with the good work! ^^

is it really so impossible for these guys to not empathize with the losers/cucks of these stories that they would go through the trouble of rewriting dialogue to make themselves feel better? this is genuinely sad

An improvement!

Rewriter must be a genuine cuck if they keep doing this bullshit

This is the same like turning anime characters black

Even the ntr plot was better