[Original Rewrite] [Nanahara Mitsuru] Ojisan ga Muchikko ni Ecchi na Koto o Oshieru Hanashi Joukan An Old Man Teaching An Ignorant Girl All About Sex - First Part [English] [Forbidden Eden]

i wish the second 1 gets a translation already and i wish the teachers wasnt that fucking fat

All the people who say they hate NTR would absolutely fuck a girl in a relationship and they know it. They just can't stop self-inserting as the loser.

the best, cinema

I must say, the original story was pretty mid. Now it`s completely garbage. Congrats.

The dialogue is fire

bruhh but ntr is my forte so this is really good. the girl is sexy as always

Meh. This isn't like Ryoji's "Little Sister" rewrite where you take a really generic and trashy story with good art and elevate it by changing the plot and making the MC's related. This is just the same story as the original but with cheating on a imaginary boyfriend. Not bad but neither good or creative.

Hol up, is this like a counterattack to the retard who wrote a vanilla rewrite of a NTR douj? The retardation is spreading smh, stop rewriting shit

Who thought this would be better lol? What a joke

How can someone stoop so low and make this

Bwahaha who's the loser making this?

fuck these gay re writes

Mother Fucker... i dislike NTR in general like any intelligent person, but wasting time in "correct" shitty stories its for idiots.

Why? No need for this.

Original was better