[nikukyu (Shinima)] Kimi to Himitsu no Upload 1 | Our Secret Upload 1 [English] {Doujins.com} [Digital]

7.46/10, It's all about the money isn't it

I wonder if this is mtl'd from chinese, it's totally wrong since the introduction.

Premise is superbly exciting, art is cute and hot asf. I still shy away from segging another as an irl principle so I may be projecting, though. Nevertheless, this is an epic read. SUGOI

Hoping it's that she felt bad about rejecting him once he dropped out, and is trying to make it up to him by earning enough money for him to go to college. But who knows, maybe it's generic harem garbage.

I'm curious about page 31.. is it that she was not recording, she wasnt actually a virgin or she did nit cum? Its weird for me. What he asked? I bet the translation is kinda off

So, She wants tuition for college Doesn't this count as prostitution?

can u niggas not read? theyre just selling vr porn. thats the plot

Art is good, but need more focus on story

Yeah I’m lost on this one what is happening

The plot is not plotting bro it doesn't makes sense

story SUCK

I don't if the story is bad or if the translation was bad

This is just not good.

what

Maybe they are neighbors or childhood friends either way good shit

It's kinda weird that he was apparently traumatized enough by the rejection that he dropped out of school, but NOT enough that he's still (mostly) fine with her just walking into his house and asking him random shit. I feel like there's a logic disconnect there

Nigga how big of a cuck are you?? That everything is netorare????

So what kind of Neto is this? You basically share how your partner pussy's feels like. It's like your partner getting a gangbang from hundreds, thousands, millions of your viewer. . It's an indirect gangbang, i know it's not like other guy putting their penis into you gf but, other guy knows how exactly how your gf pussy feels like. . Damn it

The girl is hot, art is good too.

Shooting an av is sooo HOTT🥵 it should have it's own tag💯

btw, defloration tag missing, look at page 23

The writing is weird, but it's simple: 1: the setting is one where tech's advanced enough to have AR (Augmented reality, look it up, kinda like google glasses) and they got feelings too. 2: MC is a hikkikomori dropout, rejected by his childhood friend. 3: AR porn is selling REALLY well, so CF wants to make "a tape" with his sensations, because dude has the tech to record it (which is different from the generic tech to feel it that everyone has) That's the entire premise of this, basically high tech amateur porn. Through it there may be hints taht CF may like MC, maybe she was just shy about him asking her out in front of the entire class... Maybe.

@Pasar Kode Nuklir "I saw her reject a cute looking senpai" are you a minor? Is that why you can't read?

which part of childhood friend do u guys find it hard to understand? that's why they still hangout together

So she rejected him and is still coming around for Sex ? Weird.

how many girls rejected him in his highschool

You mfs gotta go back to school if you can't understand the clear Aug vr type braindance plot

Weird translation but okie 😋

Interesting concept but poorly exicuted. Still super cute

??? I don't understand what's happening

Way to confusing and frankly boring

fuck that translation i just ignore it and imagine my own lines then continue to fap

Literally no idea wtf is going on

Read it just because the sequel is tagged yandere.

Wtf is this translation???

Idk if it was just the translation or the actual writing itself but yeah, this was a hard read. Nice art, scenes definitely need to be longer though.

Holy shit, i have a fucking stroke trying to read man. Anyways very good art 💯

@Secretmarrow I’m glad it’s not just me. I was starting to question my English skills after the first page. It felt like I could and couldn’t understand at the same time lol

My main gripe is the actual sex while drawn nice is lackluster because every act basically ends immediately before it can fluster. There's basically only two pages of penetration and it's done... Also the "plot" is mad confusing, just feels like everything happens just to happen, the premise is outlandish enough as it is lmfao. Hopefully the next entries work on that.

WHY ISN'T THERE A DEFLORATION TAG, I'LL KEEP MISSING ON DEFLORATION WORKS BECAUSE OF THIS

gonk barely scrolled that BD and still made some serious eddies. this is some preem shit chooms

impossible fucking read. got to page 7 and gave up because it gave me a headache

Lmao, the model looks kinda similar to the 2nd girl.

Did the porn bots finally make it into the comments?

Great one, but hella hard to understand

In second chapter she seems to be jealous of the MC getting bigger while being watched by the 2nd girl. Something tells me she has feelings for MC, rejected him cause of some stupid reason, felt guilty that he left the school, found a way to monetise their sex to farm cash so both could go to college or something. Just that she fucked up and spilled the beans to the 2nd girl. Potentially the 2nd girl also likes him, and could have been the reason why the 1st girl rejected him, cause of some female solidarity? Well thats my theory at least for 2 chapters that we have.

So we have cp2077 braindance but its porn book. Nice

no love here sad. also TL is kinda rough.

So she rejects him but it's only is back to him for his vr thing and making money? and he is fine with it?

Huh.. Why is she still hang out with him? Im confused