[bekobeko] Bullying a Man's Hole for Cheating (MTL)

rare but understandable

What a find she's so hot

true and then be forced to eat it

Any man who cheats should have their balls crushed (⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)

love it, so hot. i hope he gets to fuck her at a later date. switch fucking is hot

@The Erogaki, Thank you very much for such a high rating and the kind words! I appreciate them! And also, maybe just a little BIT for pleasure heh.

Truly cheaters should get treatment like this. Not for pleasure, of course. Beautifully translated, beautifully executed. Well done. 10/10

@TheVibesChill a true man of class and culture! @Hellenic I do my part for us pervs of taste heh. The other TL wasn't 300% off, but I find smut of this nature needs prose if you want to keep in the mood! @lilgold glad you liked it, and I'm right there with you! @negaMech it truly is!

I love this

Lawd! If that's the less sexy version they saved our lives 😨. Don't know if our bodies could have handled that. "Now you're blushing and you've got an erection. Nobody's got enough blood!!!" Extra credit if you know that quote...

"I miss when futas didn't have balls" You motherfuckers piss me off to the max. I didn't even realize such a tilting comment could exist. Balls, no balls, both are good.

@craze123, Interesting! Didn't catch that, though that brings up a question about page 24 on here. In the original she says, "あんたのちんぽの ..." so I probably should have translated that in a similar style, no? I had it that way largely because of said page, but if those both are closer to what you suggest, I'll keep that in mind! And I'm not super shy about mixing it up a bit, I'm just trying to not go too crazy haha. @BOOBsuXer69, who says I'm gay?

nooooooo,we are not gay,you ate lying

you guys just gay

I miss the goold ol days when futas didn't have balls.......this just makes them look like trannies

Appreciate the effort with the translate. I think one note, on the last page the subject is 俺のちんぽ i.e. "My dick" rather than "I" so instead of "I have no rights to my dick" it probably would have been better as "But my dick has no rights... right...?" I think in any case though, as a translator you should feel free to mix it up a little bit to make the language more natural in English, even if it changes the meaning a little.

Thank you for the kind words, cathedralgore and spoopie! I appreciate them! drybeanrain, I agree with your note, it does feel a little odd now! I'll have to be a little tighter on my QC, but I was just a little too excited to finally get this out hahah. And glad you like the ENG/JP mixing! I'm personally in the camp that Japanese honorifics/laughs are a lot more impactful than trying to find equivalents in English. The JP ones just feel like they carry more "umphf". lxxddxxk, it is certainly one way to re-instill devotion in a cheater lol! And thank you for the crab, in return, 🥓

Tbh cheater deserve to get punish like this lol

much better than the other translation

I like how you kinda mix Japanese with the English like the "You're calling me Sama now?" Part that's pretty good. I think some lines sound kinda off like it wouldn't make sense to hear out loud like the "I'm going to cuuuum" part she says it just seems a lil wonky. I would just say as feedback to read it outloud and see if it sounds like something somebody would say and the rest is good

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It was good enough good sir

Hello all! This is my first solo go at translating a doujin! I did this because I felt like the first go was so rough that it took away from the characters established in the OG! Please let me know if you have thoughts otherwise, as more than anything, I want to give this artist their due in ways I can afford! Yes, I know it is MTL, but I did sincerely do more than MTL input-output slop! Please do let me know if there's any feedback you have, because I want to give this artist their due in English where possible! I look forward to your feedback, before, if it's okay, moving on to other spots!