[Original Rewrite (Terasu MC)] Boku no Netorase Seiheki ni Tsukiatte kureru Kanojo A Girlfriend Who Plays Along with My Cuckold Fetish + CG [English] [Defan752 & Tekkamaki] [Digital]

The king of retard ntr goes to... MC TERASU🎉🎉

The 2 rewrites are much better than the original. Great work!

Unsigned partial rewritings are disrespectful to authors. Learn how to write and draw and make your own fanfiction.

Idk man, this artist really loves fucked up things

there should be rewrite tag, to block it

How can someone want to get cucked so bad they delete the loyal ending to serve their fetish. I'm in awe

Lol this isn't even a rewrite, all it does is cut out the part the gf still remains loyal at the end, nothing else changes

probably the author just get into too deep with ntr that they obsessed with it now so it actually make sense to rewrite this since this wasn't ntr enough to they opinion

make a continuation for the original one instead of rewriting it 😭

retarded shit for retards

Well Lordxev im fapping for both of us

unironically kill yourself uploader kun

Sad rewrite, where the girl seems to fall deep into the ntr. Why the change i don't know. It's shit but i ain't fappung on those, i'm curious on what shit turns ntr story try to take to make the girl fall in love with the other guy...and this is just a cliché one. Meh.

Just in case it wasn’t clear in my last comment in the future we will get more “Altered” or actually “Rewritten” pieces of work. Just make sure to properly label it/put some effort into thinking of labels. Makes it so your content/creation will get to the people that will enjoy it. If I want small alterations I’d look at the altered tab. If I wanted a complete rewrite I’d go to rewrite. PS personally I’m excited knowing that AI could bring back characters from stories that have ended that we like or just creating more content for us to consume. Obviously probably take a long time for good stories but I’ll take more artwork if it’s available 😅 Some characters just don’t get enough love from artists and with AI we can basically get Hentai of anyone/anything

technically speaking I don’t think this is a rewrite. I’d go with “Altered”. My assumption is in the future we will get more with more access to AI and more personalization. Problem is we have to label it correctly. This is the same story but slightly altered. If you plan to do a rewrite you shouldn’t want to keep any of the text. I can see needing some of the introduction to stay the same but cmon actually write something. Put some effort into brainstorming plot points. It’s not hard if you actually put some effort in. Great Art No Rewriting so it’s the same story LOL equivalent of having changed the names or color of her hair.

Which ever Faggot did this "Rewrite" should honestly get both Chemicaly and Physicaly Castrated because 1. Theres no cohesion in the story now because retard took out the pages where Tsubame remains Loyal to her BF 2. Because of the lack of Loyalty Pages it make 0 sense on why she'd be back with him Jerking him off to a video cuz she broke up with after the 2nd Cuckholding 3. It also makes 0 since cuz in the Pure Love side story thing she's still with her BF despite the aformentioned break up, so she has 0 reason to suck his dick and tease him while he's watching the video of her swallowing Youta's cum, that he shouldnt've been shown because Youta said no more videos for him post break up

We really need ban rewrite shit

Can we get "rewrite" tag pls

i actually had issues seeing where it got changed other than removing few pages, proper garbage this thing

This is literally the Zeta Gundam New Translation all over again

Shitty "rewrite."

“Original” “Rewrite” Cringe shit ngl

I taught there was something new. Hope Tsubame's story still have a continuation.

While I'm okay with NTR. This rewrite is just awful, and the worse rewrote I read so far as it feels forced.

What exactly is rewritten here? All I see is that some of the pages got removed/rearranged. I literally compared every matching page and the text is the same in the original and here

So this is what happen if Tsubame really fall for the big guy

yeah keep reposting ts

You no talent having leech. Keep your self insert re-writes to yourself

talentless leech

this "original rewrite" is so shit ruining the artist story for some self insert ntr bullshit just because terasu decide tsubame wont fall for the bull lmao

she's hot asf and cute too