[Hirahira (Hirari)] Comitia Shucchou Henshuubu ni Itta Hi kara Tsuma no Yousu ga... 4 + extra 2 [Digital] (Part Color Ban)
[ひらひら (ひらり)] コ○ティア出張編集部に行った日から妻の様子が... 4 + extra 2 [DL版] (パートカラー版)
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idtester
disappointing way to end the story. the girl never truly apologised for her cheating and made a family with her cheater who forced her to have sex with her despite her having a husband. she even said that her husband had became a burden on her(if I'm not mistranslating it). the girl should've been the one in place of the husband to have her life destroyed, instead she got a daughter. and what, the author needed to find some problem, any problem so he showed that the husband cheated on her too so it couldn't become one side's fault. he just wanted to draw that how miserable the husband had became was entirely his fault. and I noticed in few last couple of panels that she had a child just an year after her divorce, like wtf, she was dead ready to have a child with anyone
toticollector
The problem with this story is not the NTR. That's a genre and peeps should know what they get into once they click the link. The problem is the senseless re-direction where the mangaka redeems the editor and makes the husband a villain. He even had the husband plotting murder so he seems worse than the guy who blackmails and coerces women into sex. Ridiculous.
tnk13
The FMC is the real villain of this story - if she had the guts to come clean, then maybe none of this would have happened. And yet she moves on basically like nothing happened because she walked in on her husband cheating. If having a child was so important to her (and she said it was), then she should have divorced the husband anyway. Marriages where goals aren't shared or made clear never work.
I think if the MC had any guts, he'd go talk to her at least - he even says he might forgive her if she just apologized - both get closure, and maybe MC gets to move on too. Just overall disappointing ending.
play1871
誰看的懂這個劇情阿,女主出軌明明結婚了,男主還說女主的傢俱還在,女主出軌生了小孩還做2份兼職他的出軌老公沒有養家喔,這作者寫的劇情都是要生下出軌的孩子才會完結,下個花店劇情是下個出軌生小孩了會完結
vosonkun
I apologize to everyone if my message offends you, but this is my opinion.
vosonkun
I may be being too cruel, but I don't think cheaters deserve happiness. They ruined their own marriages for themselves and are happy, while the ones who were abandoned are the ones who suffer the pain. I don't think that's right. It's true that after separating, there's no connection between them, but why doesn't the cheater get anything, but the victim suffers the pain? It really makes me feel irritated and disgusted. She remarried, had children, a good job, and no longer had to grieve over the past. Even though she was wrong but MC had to suffer through it all. It's true that MC is partially at fault, but cheating is not the right thing to do. Every human being deserves a second chance, but those who do wrong and feel no remorse do not deserve it. Maybe if there was another episode where the main character really moved on and had a happy life, I might be okay with that. But right now, all I see is these cheating scum living happy lives, and it really makes me angry.
Skatlads15
@Ritsu23 I don't exactly hate NTR, and I agree people that don't like it should probably stay away. But there are a lot of NTR with absolutely terrible writing lol. For me, it makes sense to criticize them, for those that want better quality NTR stories.
Ritzu23
It never ceases to amaze me that there are people who hate ntr yet come here to read it, if vanilla is a sweet dessert then ntr is bitter coffee, if you don't like coffee then don't drink it.
Skatlads15
There was no coming back for their relationship, but somehow only the husband gets a sad ending...
minminazusa
@Blankroom : There are 5 years skip in the story. He did try to stab her, but after seeing she goes on with life, he just woke up and think of things better, time to move on. Going back home at least gave him somewhere solid to begin. || Hirari’s stuffs got less big dick energy ntr, and more like the boyfriend/husband had his hand too full of his own problem and kind of lash out so there’s really no good timing to talk it out. Besides, like the scene where he caught him cheating, there’s no right answer. If she try to stay calm, he blamed it to her also doing things behind him. If she’s angry, he gets angry too and do the “kettle calls the pot black” talk. If she just quietly accept that, he will keep bringing it up like war crimes to escalate his demand on her.
Renaado
Found the NTR simp just below me lmao😂
sevenie
Heh pathetic, ppl say ntr bullshit this and that and yet you still read this even they add netorare tag on it. Fuckin moron!
Anyway, good art!
Renaado
NTR is just bullshit to begin with anyways with plot flying out to orbit with just how stupid it is, even if the fem mc got superpowers who can literally pulverize other people with a snap of a finger there will still always be that one fat ass, gyaru-oh, or old man that can NTR em for some dumbass reason.
zombieadd
@Blankroom: again, it's hentai logic; it's like a trope at this point where the main reason is that she has fallen to lust (which they always show the unsatisfying masturbation unless it is a real big penis, ha! wonders). Then plot flies out the window, passive MC, cheating, yada yada. Just don't expect high quality literature here. Anyway, my overall take: nice art, NTRash story. Good shit. PEACE.
Blankroom
That last bit was unnecessary and the author is a faggot. Why would he go to his parents when it's his family that fucked him over. Took that long and this is it? What about his payments? His job? The whole reason for this set up. Why did that guy settle down when he was fucking other girls? Why did she stay with him knowing that. The author just doesn't give a fuck after making so many parts.
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