[Genkai Hatsudensho (Nakamo)] Onna Gal Joushi to Furin suru Hanashi 4

Whats wrong with a girl being more attracted to an objectively more attractive dude than the mid looking MC? The MC always was a placeholder for the tanned dude anyways. And its bot like he doesnt already have a wife of his own

Where the fuck is the translocation for part 3

ntr author always write shit story

you guys are really bitching?🤣🤣🤣🤣 hey if its getting transelated we'll see . Also ITS NOT REAL.

From 1 to 3 is ok. 4 to 5 NEVER HAPPENED.

Damn. What garbage have you cooked? Waste of my damn time.

the only way this shit could work out is if the guy goes back in time and fucks the ntr man and add him to his harem

i mean she was still in love with her ex.. blushing and shii.. she never loved mc... but time travel now ?? lol what's the author smoking ?

Bros fine with male mc ntr, but female mc ntr and its all "waaah, the author sucks!" And "waah, the story is shit now, waah!" Like she never belonged to the mc anyway, she was just an affair, and she shows that she just likes to have fun. D is D boys.

I'm not against NTR, but the story was going well, why this? And what's with this random time travel? Has the author lost his way? Is he experimenting with his audience? What a waste of time... Unfortunately, I don't see a future for this manga.

author went full on retard mode

Brader what is this

Author should just throw this shit into the void and start over from chapter 3.

Let me guess... next is the wife ?

If the sauce tasted extra good so far, why adding useless ingredients...

Rule of thumb to enjoy ntr is pretend you are the guy cucking.

Author said ch 5 storyboard is in progress. I honestly don’t think he can salvage the damage that’s been done with this chapter. Even if he does some time travel bs

Another sequel that reeks of shit. It’s really a shame they can’t make something perfect,fucking pathetic cuck author who’d rather ruin everything. This time travel isn’t going to solve anything, given that the MC got NTR’d. The first three chapters, which were perfect, are already ruined, and nothing could change that. My disappointment and disgust are immeasurable

@Barry McCockinner As if you're doing anything better? Might as well be calling yourself out while you're at it. Always funny to see one retard acting worse than those in the comments.

Damn the comment section is still filled with a bunch of losers who always come back to see if they're comments got a reply. Can y'all do something more productive since Christmas is over?

@alansmith20 Oh boy, you're such a cringe cuckfag aren't ya? And a dumbass to boot

In case anyone lazy to stroll on X here's what they said: "@nakamo0000 Thanks to everyone who read ep4. I’ve seen all your comments and I know this turn is divisive. This series is 5 parts, with the next as the finale—I’ll see it through in my own way, and I’d be happy if you stay with it to the end." Lmao let's hope it's a good vanilla harem ending...

We had a good thing you, son of a bitch. We had a harem and a great relationship. But you just had to ruin it. You and your fetish.

Will say, author is basically begging for everyone to have hope in the last chapter. But like, if you have low expectations then you won’t get hurt if it doesn’t meet standards. Having a rug pull NTR chapter is kinda fucked. Definitely will piss off everyone invested in the story especially if it was supposed to be a 5 chapter story.

The author is getting fucking grilled on his twitter lmao.

Ts is hilarious

@nakamo0000 is his new Twitter

What's the point of the things they did together if it's going to be erased anyway?

If you need time travel to unscrew up your narrative, then scrap what you've already done and rewrite it. The best part of this whole saga is that we, as the fans, can just cut out a few images towards the end of the last chapter, leaving it ending with all three together.

adultery be like 😂😂😂😂😂

Not gonna read anything in the future from this guy again. Even if it's not initially tagged as NTR the guy can at any point throw this shit in as he has shown here. Heck, on Pixiv he didn't tag it as NTR either and he himself damn sure knows why. This Timetravel and last chapter isn't gonna solve anything and makes in the best case scenario the 3 previous chapters completely void which is a retarded direction as well. The dude made Reiko unlikeable to boot as we know it only needs a good dicking down to make her character change. So what is the actually point with that 4th chapter timetravel BS. He should stayed in the present and with his wife and forget Reiko, That would've been the best outcome at this point.

@Grungelad - https://x.com/nakamo0000 , https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/63852455

Did the artist really delete his X/Twitter? I wanna see the pixiv comments and his statement if anyone could provide a link. If this is where it ends due to backlash, then this shit is funny. He had the best set up for the next chapter; then some retard took over and figured "Y'know what a cheating office manga is missing? ...Some time travel..." lmao

I dont mind ntr but do it at start not do it suddenly out of nowhere, but lmao author getting cooked in their twitter and pixiv comments section he had to write an explaination in JP,CN,EN

Should've just ended with her back together with her ex instead of this bs time travel

*coming back one week later* oh, boy, you'll are soooooo insecure, dont ya?

The art improved, but the story became shit. I feel sorry for the wife lol, shes more than enough.

gg author it's shattered my expectations for the upcoming chapter everyone is waiting for the chapter but you destroy it,no one will look again on this series that's all thanks from me 🥀🥀

GG author your work is done and wasted for nothing you won't be able to make a comeback from this.

Lazy deus ex machina ruining a solid series. Can't tell if the cuckolding is a self insert at this point with how often these Japanese artists hyperfixate on the fetish.

Wow this place became a Warfield. Well I seriously cannot wait for the next part thanks to the reaction of the people lololol

I dont hate ntr or what but this sh*t is beyond comprehension. Imagine creating a peak tri sequence with a plot that hints a better outcome for the three but no this retard author decided to flip the story 180 degree with time travel nonsense. Even if the dude get back to the past and eventually hook the gal it will still not erase the fact that he got cucked. The gal is blushing and all whenever she talks to the douche demonstrating that shes still very attracted to him and whats more she didnt even hesitate to fck the guy to the point that she decided to cut her relationship with him and go with her ex

Of course, the artist includes Time Travel™.

Oh, I don't like where this story is going.

I would've liked to maybe see him marry the two or something special but I guess Author wants the cuck route.

I liked where this story was going but this chapter lowkey ruined it for me, showing disinterest in the guy and then getting back with him.... Dunno it just....

This is a crazy 180 bro

lol MC got cucked lol ahahahah

Not even gonna talk about the weird ass time travel ending which was wholly unnecessary. That ending now means that the author is gonna go one of three probable directions. 1.) He gets with the gyaru instead and as others said, her ex gets with his wife. 2.) He somehow succeeds in getting both of them (highly unlikely). 3.) Because of the hate the author got online that apparently made them delete Twitter, they go scorched earth and end up having the guy get with neither and truly being NTRd. Speaking of the author’s Twitter, does anyone have their social media details? Can’t find them online to check if what people are saying is true.

Most people defending this are missing the point. Let’s put aside the NTR and cuck allegations and all that. The author straight up just switched the direction of the story. The last page of Part 3 literally shows her replying to her ex’s message indifferently with autocomplete suggestions showing “a pain” and “kinda tough”, showing how disinterested she is in being in contact with him again. Probably because he stopped contacting her, and was partying instead. Then in this part, she all of a sudden switches up and is really into him again? In its defense, I can’t say that something like that couldn’t happen or that it’s unrealistic, but guiding the story in a certain direction and then being like “actually let me 180 and ignore all previous setups” is really poor writing skills. At the end of the day, it’s a porn manga and you can’t expect quality, but if you’re setting up even a barebones story which has character dynamics in it, why completely ignore that and go against it?