[Takotokite] Ao ga Tokeru [English] [MTL]

Everyone is just shit. But at least the cuck wins in the end, that's rare. And if you're gonna start shit like this, at least don't regret it in the end, or just not do it at all. Anyways, peak art, shit translation, mid story, writing, characters, setting, dialogue, worldbuilding, etc. Overall, still peak

That why I don't like this kind of thing never good about it how it ends

Well that was peak retardation, and not only because of the translation. Yousuke likes Saki, and it seems like the feeling is mutual but they can't be honest with themselves, Akane also seems to like Yousuke but she wanted to be clear with Saki, Ryota is a scum, he made a whole plan to let Akane be with Yousuke so that he ends up with Saki, after the deed is done Saki accepts that Yousuke is out of her reach, Ryota tries to make Saki date him but she rejects him and what he does right after? He lets his uncle join on the fun and gets pushed aside in the middle of it, Ryota wanted to make Yousuke the cuck and yet he got cucked by his own uncle, Yousuke and Akane ended up getting together and Saki accepted her fate as a toy/lewd woman. What a trash doujin holy shit lol 🤣

This is just depressing ngl

I've never been so limp in my entire life

im have a fuckin mixed feeling when read this, like "will yousuke got ntr-ed?" "will akane not enough with yousuke and join ryota?" "ahh ryota, tipical ntr guy and he played aono like toy" but the end? the guy i think average ntr guy, become so pathetic with regred. and yousuke? i think he will slimed out by akane (like dominant female) and used as refuge but, yeah.. rest of it better read by your own. honestly this one have good plot and twist afterall

Can someone re-translate this?? It sucks man

Crazy stuff.

also its tagged ffm where its clearly mmf this website has gone to shit with all the jewish copyright bullshit and this retarded anti-spam check

I could understand a pajeet nigger better than this retarded translation just read the original atp

damn quite deep at the first part, feels made by their real experience but the second cuc part with unc is somewhat forced and a delusion.

Okay so I went to the site this was officially posted via a vpn and I found out two interesting things 1. This doujin comes with audio??? it sounded hot asl too, lucky bastards and 2. The reviews... holy shit the reviews, we can write a thousand comments here shitting on NTR but it means nothing when you have overwhelming support from the Japanese customer's praising it

Dumb logic and both parties at fault 1. Aono literally said to stop it when mc was going to kiss. The futons were 4 feet apart max. Mc could have easily heard her and stopped. But no. We throw logic out of the window. 2. Mc needs to have balls. How come you can kiss another girl when the girl you like is literally sitting beside. What do you mean by "It's not that I don't want to" when the other girl even asked before the kiss 3. Aono is dumb. She could easily see mc was trying to say something and the other girl leaned into the kiss. Yet even after seeing that, she assumed mc has given up on her. Even for argument's sake if mc and other girl kissed due to the game, why would Aono then agree to sleep with the other guy when mc tried to object it and then later let the other guy take her virginity and fuck her brains out? Typical ntr trope of making the girl a dumb slut. Bullshit plot. No coherency.

Bro couldn't wingman both of them so he needs a sacrifice 💀

Guys, this doesn't have a good ending. . . . The mc is still a cuck, that was him at the end, watching Aono's video. . . . He even made Akane wear the same costume. I feel bad for Akane, trying to get that cuck's love.

Peak Reverse NTR

It was fine at the beginning but it became pretty f*cked up. Sigh. Whose really to blame here? I never really understood NTR.

Damn, she was drugged afterall, such tragedy…, and what an ass friend MC had. Glad the MC moves on a happy life.

Nice.

can somebody translate all of this artist Doujins ? so much page, great art . Peak

Actually this in my type of ntr were mc found a girl who likes him and got good ending and the cheaters turned braindead and got bad ending Could someone recommend something like this

Yeah this quite fuck up

I too think need a better friend. Why the fuck my friend send me this code????? Nah it ain't arousing, it's traumatizing

Nah bruh she belongs to the streets

wtf bro this is so tragic. nonsense translation though

That first BJ-scene was really erotic... too bad the story crashed and burned pretty hard in the last third of the story...

真是個悲慘的故事。

Dogshit TL, not the best art but there are a few enjoyable (and erotic) scenes that I like a lot. This is more or less BSS + misunderstanding of revenge sex story and has quite a 'flavor' to read that got me somewhat interested, more so if it wasn't for the garbage MTL. I like reading the inner thoughts of characters narrating their expectations and end up otherwise, that internal conflict, etc; the ending for MC could hit it for some folks like IRL, many of us (including me) end up striking up a rel with another person that's not your crush or married to someone else not on your list. Also, the part about Hina is not from this story, it's from きみの全てを奪うまで --- "Kimi no Subete o Ubau made" --- "Until I take everything from you"

Glad the MC didn't turn into a cuck and got himself a girl who cares about and loves him dearly. Irony is the friend who NTRd him now is getting NTRd by his uncle hahaha! Serves him right. He's really the only one of the four who loses. Aono kind of loses too because instead of being petty about how Akane kissed the MC, she could've accepted he was trying to keep himself available for her but because of one kiss, she decides fuck him, I'm gonna fuck the other guy. Now she's got Stockholm syndrome and is broken mentally. So one couple is good and going on a steady lovey dovey track while the other has fallen into darkness.

@Hai Hai kazuma desu Hope someone fucks your girlfriend and when you find out you have nothing but trauma. Fucking cunt.

Ahhhhh ,I wanna bang someone else gf bad. Bring them .

Ryota won the battle, but lose the war as Aono will never love him back. She didn't reply with the confession. Ryouta would be tormented forever knowing that Aono would be fucking different men. MC is loyal, but because of his best friend's betrayal and that the girl he loves gives in into temptation that he chose Hina.

god it really is drawn as if it's him though, that would just be so dumb and fitting of an artist whose other works are completely driven by porn-logic. anyway, again, it'd be really dumb and make no sense(because how tf would he even get the video in the first place) so yea, I will choose to believe it's a rando/noncanon like the onsen scene which is super clearly not canon

well at least yousuke got a happy ending. with a chick who's actually into him for him. some trauma but in an actual relationship unlike the other two. i will choose to believe that the last panels are not him because it makes 0 sense and spits in the face of the rest of the story.

That friend is worse than a piece of shit

Dam that friend is worse than big yahu

wow MC is not a cuck

I'm annoyed at the part where she is disappointed at her crush? fucking another girl, even though she's fucking another guy? Apparently she considered it some sort of revenge fuck since he fucked that girl before, and then she goes off and becomes a whore. It's stupid.