[Asagi Ryu] Nanako, the Naughty One Ikenai nanako san Volume 1 English

Stupid ass penguin censorship

The story does feel a little jumpy in its pacing and the style in which they chose to censor is a little bit weird. Aside from that it's pretty hot

it feel likes this story is gonna be all over the place even without the shitty translation

A bit better than a raw MTL, but still quite bottom of the barrel. Wrong pronouns galore, bubbles missing text altogether, unnatural phrasing and odd sentence parsing and structure. A lot of that stuff is often a big clue of AI involvement by the way, so I wouldn't be surprised if this was an edited AI translation. What doesn't help is how the translator thinks his "work" should be immune to criticism because this is free and by a non-professional, which can't be the sign of a well adjusted individual.

Dunno about that TL job... Odd phrasing, poor editing (frequently splitting words across different lines with hyphens), "forgetting" what literally just happened a couple pages prior (like the MC claiming it's been so long since he touched her breasts despite literally having done just that in the bath some 5 pages prior)...

This feels like actual serialisation