[yasaka] 目白阿尔丹NTR (卖瓜老板个人汉化)

I don't usually comment a lot but man, setting up a wholesome scene and then ntr is for a lack of a better word disappointing.

All NTR artists should be dismembered

@thehr1275 The thing is, that, for example, the Air Groove and Finemo doujin just dirties the Umas' so bad, with those fuckboys (guys who have a one-night stand). Basically that bitch shows Air Groove and Finemo as some kind of "sluts". Plus, how wouldn't he add NTR? He did it by one of these fuckboys sending a image to air groove's trainer (I think) of them fucking, though the trainer was kind of an ugly bastard (though a good person). The least possible good thing that would happen to this part would be for Ardan's trainer to not go to the party along with Ardan, or them sleeping on the same room. Though I find it impossible since that bitch of Yasaka self-inserts itself as the trainer, so he'll also make him not be brave enough to interrupt.

One of the most wholesome plots I've ever seen and yakasa has to make a fucked up NTR sequel to it. Genuinely fuck this guy. Some people just don't deserve to be able to draw at all.

First, it was the air groove and finemo strong ego filled bastards. Now a pure part and a NTR/shota part? Really, if you had to compare yasaka with kumiyabe, kumiyabe would fall short. Fuck yasaka, this guy should smell like rotten fish, more like his entire apartment.

Part 2 is definitely gonna be that fucked up NTR ugly bastard plot twist because in the last page document list theres the "Social gathering" (I got from translating) Which is taking place in tokyo hotel which is obviously a sign that part 2 is just gonna be the trainer entering the hotel room just to see mejiro ardan being fucked by some ugly bastards

One of the most fucked up uma doujin on the market. Brace yourself vanilla enjoyers , because shit about to go down real bad.

it's just unfortunate. Can't deny Yasaka's art is very good but just a shame the plot is always just tired, reprehensible, and unstomachable shock value slop

@M8 GTE The fact that Yasaka is using wholesome uma x trainer as setup for ugly bastard and shouta NTR is straight up vile and rotten. I looked for the fanbox note on this doujin and from what I saw the antags are the URA chairman/president who is a ugly bastard and his son who is a shouta I think. What I think is going to happen is they are going to blackmail her into leaving her trainer and becoming their sex pet. Super fucked up since what I gathered from the translations is that her trainer is deathly afraid of her leaving him. I think we can all agree with Jules Winnfield here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5_TTuYRTK_Y Fucked Up Repugnant Shut and Yasaka cannot be forgiven.

@VanVanVanKo Yea. Ardan and her trainer could go to Akikawa and she could protect them from the URA president trying to tear them apart. She would probably reprimand them for their relationship but would be understanding of the situation. Same with the Mejiro family. They have money and power and could protect Ardan and her trainer.

@chauvesou Because Yakasa is going for pure shock value. Going from wholesome pure love with Ardan and her trainer to her getting NTR'd away by a ugly bastard with money and power. All the cucks who get off to NTR are gonna eat that shit up. It's seriously going to be one of the most fucked up NTR stories to ever exist. Ardan and her trainer are clearly very much in love and to have that destroyed by a the URA president who probably just wants her as a plaything is going to be some seriously fucked up and evil shit.

@M8 GTE That part sounds considerably stupid considering how much power Akikawa actually has.

Shit is going to be painful to read since part 1 is already this wholesome

@dounttouchmeplease2 So i found the note Yasaka made for this doujin. This is part one that focuses on the pure love between Ardan and the trainer. Part two is going to be the actual NTR part and the antagonists are going to be the URA president (who is going to be an ugly bastard) and his son (who I assume is going to be some spoiled douchebag). Seriously fuck Yakasa. That is some seriously deplorable, abhorrent, and repugnant shit.

@dounttouchmeplease2 Yea I think you are right. At the end I think some dude has discovered that they are in a relationship and is planning to blackmail her and NTR her away from her trainer. If that's the case that's really fucked up. The doujin may not be done yet and the NTR part is probably going to come later. If Yasaka seriously tears her away from her trainer that loves her to death for some fucked up blackmail NTR plot, that will be some seriously foul shit.

Probably someone found out that they're in a relationship and blackmailed her or else he's getting fired

How is this NTR? I ran it though TL and at most he's afraid she will end up leaving him one day and he pleads with her to never leave him. Other than that this seems pretty emotional and wholesome. I could be missing something though since this artist's last two uma doujins where NTR.