[Aodouhu (Various)] Someoneeros (Working!!) [English] [Usual Translations]

@ThePlagueMan it's a doujin. It's in the anime you fucking retard smh

@RedHawk01 if your english is shit, don't use it.

Fuck this doujin author, I hope he can suicide

I love skinny girls but she's too violent

I'm Second

That was a bad netorare, you didn't get to know the mc and his relationship with the girl which made it less impactful when she cheated. The art changes through out the story from good to bad to worse. I give this doujin a 5/10, the first chapter gives it a rating of around 6/10 purely based on my love for the art but having som low level art and story in the other chapters canceled out the high rating in a way giving it it's score. As netorare's goes it's pretty vanila I give it a final score of 4/10 below average.