[laliberte] SPIRAL part 4 - FINAL [English] (lowres)

I know this guy is repetitive but damn i can feel the pounding impact on this dudes art and the epic ntr

@rangabang Everyone hated Paradise because it was all over the place and the ending made no sense. After being tortured, he chooses to die rather than become their slave and gets revenge by killing the guy when he has the chance. But that’s it he does nothing to his mother, friend, or gf, who became attached to the other guy during the 3 days they were stranded together after he dies. Afterward, his friend basically pretends he doesn’t exist, his mother abandons both her children to repent for the guy’s death, and his gf now wife cheats on and treats him like shit while he knowingly raises his brother and wife’s son as his own (only time the kids aren't girls). Granted, he becomes a bestselling author, goes on shows, and still sleeps with his wife instead of being stuck in a chastity belt like Laliberte’s other MCs. But it’s still a shit ending because he ends up with nobody truly on his side, and his wife will probably go after his brother once he’s older.

Hah knew that it would end this way. Surprised that it wasn't part of the rich noble's plan. Sad that this is out of order, hope no page is missing. Also tf u mean what the story is about. It's about 2 thieves trying to steal something valuable from a noble and it backfiring.

what even is the story about

@rangabang only the fans hated it and in some part vanilla ones too because the author couldn't decide in making it vanilla, ntr or revenge. Final ending was a revenge from the MC just to get cucked again and end up alone taking care of kids that arent his, and on top of that all the girls hate him now. Its a "revenge" ending that looks more like a way to try to please everyone. Should have been revenge since the very first chance in killing the other guy, vanilla from the start (not possible with this author), completely ntr like all their works, or just the same revenge ending but with the girls not hating him, not taking care of someone else kids and not getting cucked by his wife that claimed to love him, tho we cant really expect any kind of writing skill from this author considering he does the same thing all the time.

@Rangabang Paradise literally has the same plot devices: guy with a big dick vs. guy with a small dick who ejaculates quickly. The only thing that changes is the setting.

This was weak "happy" ending for everyone, i prioritize the scenes over plot and yet both of them were poor.

Пракляты Нетарар3.

@LewdManoSaurus Hilarious, when the author tried something different with paradise everyone hated it. What exactly will it take?

@BobJones#6060 laliberte is one of the most repetitive NTR artists out there, but they have no incentive to try to be better because their fans eat up their content.

@BobJones#6060: about time you realize that and yet tons of degens do not or rather indulge this shit which is fine, that's what they like after all.

It's really repetitive this this author except for maybe one or two works they're all NTR with the bull being huge and can have sex for impossible long periods of time and the cuck being small, reduced to a slave with a chastity belt and finishing ridiculously fast and the FMC ends up pregnant with a girl and enjoys torturing the cuck

This guy never misses bruh