[STANKY (Kaedeko, yozo)] Kendoubu Shushou de Osananajimi no Bijin de Tsuyoi Boku no Kanojo ga, Charao ni Assari Otosareru Wake ga Nai

@Trichiya It's implied that Yuusuke was the one who vandalized the school's dojo as a part of the scheme to get the kendo club to use his personal home dojo, as a way of trapping Kaori. Whether or not the teacher had anything to do with it is left up to speculation.

holyshit its finished

I just realized, what happened to the "someone vandalized our dojo" plot point? Who did it? Was it the blond guy? Was the PE teacher involved somehow, having dirt that the blond guy used to make him do it or something? The PE teacher just appeared during those panels, clearly lust after Kaori, and that's it! That's just it! What? I don't care about the punk hitting on Kaori during the last date, but the PE teacher was given an implication that he was somehow part of a bigger arc!

Finally it's over! . Kaori is hot, the art is good and the sex scenes were good. 'The story' was what you'd expect from a ntr and the ending was quite predictable. It was clear that it'd be similar to 285624 if you had read it before.

@waldo3364 Don't be too upset. If you can read Japanese she wasn't corrupted at all. In the english they will mess this up on purpose. Context. Trauma induced involuntary, her mind and body are split. She is severely dissociated. She remained loyal and how this stop is for Takumi to find out and the abuse stops because there is no leverage, or when Dissociation ends while the rapist is near her and she kills him, that is the only two options in reality. Her body is doing "fawning" mind gets pushed away to save itself, body "fawns" to appease the abuser so they don't cause anymore harm. It's a shit plot, and bad all around. However, her core character remained, it's psychological horror.

These mfs need ghost writers or something bro. The characters and plot be so ass and the art is just the best thing you've laid your eyes on every goddamn time. Deadass the same bs but with a different paintjob

can't believe this ended before GTA 6 released

After so long, and no impregnation :( . ah well, at least the hentai is finished.

Huh this title finally end huh? I thought im gonna see One Piece ending first instead of this

Sad, the guy didn't even manage to knock her up in the ending T_T

this all because of a glass of beer lazy writing as h ntr manga as usual

Generic slop ending but I'm not really surprised

no anal.. this dude allways makes me cry.. with artoria lancer was the same.. you cant show me the goods and stop mid job.. haaaaaa

@surumeotoko Her body is under somatic. This one has a very dumb plot, but look up the bubbles, the letters, she didn't deserve this at all. Out of all the ntr, this girl is entirely innocent. Weaponize her love and this shows how evil the antagonist is. The artist knew what he was doing showing this, the english translation won't get this right at all. It's all over the panel pages, somatic body is so fucked up. Body reacts to abuser and says what the abuser wants it to say while the real girl is in her mind protected and saying everything else and can't feel anything. Dissociation is crazy, numb... everything is numb until your mind takes your body back and then violence.

@surumeotoko This is not standard Netorare. This is Psychological violence and horror, she is dissociated. Her love and devotion outweighs everything, she has no romantic feelings, or anything towards Yuuseke, profound hate yes. She is traumatized and her body, brain, and Mind is entirely split. Her body is on autopilot, everything in the panels will tell you. All the specific bubbles would tell you. After Golden week she has been with self hate and dissociated for a month back with her boyfriend if you don't know what that is... a trauma induce pressure cooker until she snaps and kills. The point of the story is her love and devotion is so profound she did everything to protect him. Everything I told you is in the panels, backgrounds. NTR changes the spikes and everything. She had no enjoyment at all, the final scene she tried to confront him, the phone is the proof, she is sending a cold and confrontational message to end her pain and he rapes her, her body is somatic. Husk no mind.

Takes this many months and years to complete a few final pages with mediocre ending holy shit. But it’s finally over, maybe the real ntr was the friends we made along the way

The longest-running NTR manga series were *Kimi no Na wa* and *Maison Ikkoku*—lasting nearly 15 years and spanning over 10 volumes—whereas this one took years just to cover a few pages. I didn't quite understand the ending—my Japanese is still poor—so did she leave her old boyfriend, or is she still with him and only seeing Yuusuke to satisfy her libido and desire for pleasure?

OMG IT'S FINALLY OVER!!!! AFTER SO MANY YEARS!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT, I WAS HERE!!! I WAS HERE CHAT!!!!

And now we wait for the translation

We got kaedeko to finish his hentai before gta6

@ShadowMist The "Id" represents primal, instinctual desires and drives. Dissociation isn't the Id taking over; it is a defensive, numbing fracture of the consciousness triggered by extreme trauma.

@ShadowMist If they care enough to translate right. It's just better off learning how to read Japanese, but we will see. This story has no actual decent ending, her loyalty and love is being weaponize. She loves Takumi and loyal to him endless loop until Dissociation ends and she snaps, in real life when dissociation snaps and force her to feel everything, hate, etc majority of trauma victims tend to kill. PTSD is one of the main ones in which she has.

@MortalObserver Like Ego being overwritten by Id, right. I hope that we can get someone competent at translation like cutegyaru/head empty to translate the rest to get a better understanding of the dialog.

@ShadowMist She doesn't crave it, disassociate makes you have zero feeling. In order to get all of this you have to read Japanese, understand everything. The ending and reading the phone would tell you the truth as well, basically a confrontation because of how it is written, he rapes her, that is what we get. She says it during the raw sex, there was nothing but a man and female beast. There is a kanji there that says 'Sanity and logic gone, which mean the body has no mind.'

@MortalObserver Wow. An actual, well thought out, character analysis...especially on this website. I'm impressed. And you're right. You can actually see the instances throughout the manga when Kaori begins to disassociate (her eyes going blank), especially toward the end; such as when she's staring at Yuusuke's dick as she's being tempted into raw sex with him or when she's ignoring Takumi's phone call in favor of more sex with Yuusuke. In each instance you can see her disassociate from what she loves and knows is right in favor of giving in to what she craves.

@Trichiya They can't. They written themselves in a wall because her whole point is dissociation, she isn't there and her body is acting on it's own. Self coercion because of mind leaving, Takumi is her everything and self guilt leads to this endless loop. If Takumi leaves because he found out. She would never remain in the loop. That is the point of it. She text and it is written as facing her fear and wants to beat the dissociation but self guilt and Takumi finding out breaks the psyche. Mind says no body responds. Yozo understands psychologically self destruction and dissociation. That is what's good, plot is shit.

It’s important to "wake up" and be reminded that the world of doujinshi is a place for netorare fans—I mean, just look at the art; the scenes, angles, women, every detail in NTR works is so well done.

@MortalObserver the plot is shit, yeah. Unless the author makes a completely separate doujin just about Kaori and the yellow hair dude (just to see Kaori more).

@Trichiya If they care enough. There are ways the Kanji is utilized to express and show she never betrayed her boyfriend. Everyone of those scenes and lines have to be done right to get the actual character other than the brain dead plot. Yozo was a genius in character creation but the plot skewered the storyline. I hope the humans do it right.

@MortalObserver I meant to say human translators. I've had enough of AI schizophrenic translations.

How many years did this doujin ran? Two? Lol 10/10 art (This is what I care about cause woman expression is the shit for me personally. Story- idc But seeing how even NTR lovers hate this says a lot on how dogshit the writing is I don't even have to read the translated version to know.

lame boring ending

@Trichiya There is no sequel because they written themselves in a wall. The translators won't get this right. You have to understand Japaness to understand all the small and important details in this story.

Alright guys, playtime's over. Move away, please. Let translators handle the rest. That aside, I'm more disappointed that I won't likely see another well-drawn character such as Kaori. If the author is making a debut on SFW manga and drawing a female character, there is chances I would notice just from how much I like the artstyle lol. But bruh, people asking for sequel? Have you guys not learn?

Yall asking for a sequel? Your grandkids are not gonna live to see it

So... Is it finally over?

Hope there's a sequel

Any chance there could be a sequel?

Begins like shit, ends like more shit.

Searched one of my favorite tags "armpit licking" and what do you know... Showed me this one has FINALLY concluded. 😅

@GTP You are right when comes to how they wanted to express it. However, in most NTR stories the woman is entirely gone and there is no inner thoughts, this story here played with dissociation, mind locking, and severe depress, self coercion, they did too much in the background that contradicts standard ntr. It is that deep and that is why this specific one is hated by the Japanese. It completely subverts the childhood love title, which means for Kaori and Takumi to push through. Her hold descent is because of her love for Takumi. Without the catalyst Yuusuke has no hold on her. That is what they did, if they would just simply kept all of that out then it would just be complete and utter the same. However, they did Takumi with the generic micro but it is why it took so long because they didn't know what to do. She remained faithful after golden week and then it says one month later after she was trying for a month with Takumi which plays into involuntary body and strong mind.

@MortalObserver I don't really know the technical details of the writing like I said, I just focus on the art and the story but thanks for explaining things I didn't know before. As for the female character feeling guilty or hating herself... isn't that just standard for these kinds of NTR stories? They all feel guilty wondering "what have I done?" before they finally lose their inhibitions. But once they're in too deep, if there's a first time, there's bound to be a next time. I tend to look at it simply; honestly, you don't need to overthink this stuff. It’s purely a matter of logic. Sure, NTR plots are written to show self-loathing or to make it seem like the character wasn't like that originally, but let's be real: she just got pounded by a huge cock a few times and got hooked. It’s as simple as that.

@GTP Well, technically he didn't win. There is a lot of small things in the background that shows that she is in a psychological spiral of self hatred and body control over the mind that is locked away so her sanity doesn't shatter. The story is bad, yes. Honestly with a female character this strong this wouldn't happen. However, mentally inside she is still intact. Normal netorare she would say mentally "it feels great, etc" but here in the end it is to Takumi. Umm, look up manga bubble text and it would explain this story that the author was not going to explain. Basically dissociation. You want the true context of it all, you have to understand the bubbles in this narrative, that is how Japanese manga work.

@LostC How long are you guys going to keep reading the same old stuff? I knew how this story would end from the very beginning. The question is, don't you guys get bored? What's the fun in a plot you can predict right from the start? Let me be clear: I don't hate NTR, but I'm not exactly a fan either—mostly because the logic is stupid. I prefer "vanilla" with intense sex scenes. With NTR, I read it once and that's it; it feels like they're just pushing a product because the genre sells well. The thing that bugs me is how they just throw in an MC as a prop—creating a character solely so they can slap the "NTR" tag on it. That is such a stupid reason, yet they keep doing it over and over. Do you guys actually like that? Even people who usually read NTR don't like that kind of thing—just think about it lol.

Even NTR lovers are disappointed imao I can't!💀

lmao it was so ass

They created a strong, loyal, powerful female to erase her entire common sense, disobey every logic. The only good thing about this is the psychological, dissociation, trauma, and self hatred. Her love and connection to Takumi literally is her execution. That is the only thing this one even shows. However, the plot makes zero sense. Towards the end she sees the video on the phone and she says "that woman" so dissociation, so at least they showed she isn't a total slut. Then in the end we see one month later, after golden week. So, may 5 to june 5th. Self worth in the six dimension of hell while she tried to have Takumi overwrite her body. It is very dumb and the actual female character if they kept to her actual character this would of never happened.

Aight. Do the en translate already

and thats it?

No pregnancy, just generic boring route of "omg, his penis tiny I need da big dick". Insane they even bothered creating this shite ending. Stop doing doujins teasing with pregnancy just to pull lazy shit like this trash, holy fuck.